I've enjoyed reading what you've written for this story. It gives the reader a new view into Kurama's (aka Shuichi Minamino's) past as Yoko Kurama. I do remember that the animated series YuYu Hakusho didn't go into a lot of details of his past, and I had heard (and read) that the movie for the series went more into detail (Sadly, I've not gotten to watch the movie. I would love to watch it tho.). It seems to me, even though you claimed to have writer's block at times (I only started reading this story today), that you have really thought out the plot of this story. I look forward to the next chapter(s)!

Your story...makes no sense, by the time I reach the end I was like...Da fuck?

I really love how you write this fanfiction, but I wish you would update faster to keep people interested in your story. Overall, it's a good quality story, but proofread your story before sending it off. You have a lot of basic grammar mistakes here. I wish there was more romance between Kurama x Aiko, but I understand you like taking things slow. Lol. :p

I liked this chapter. :3 It's starting to come together and make more sense. I wish you would make your chapters longer though.

*Confused* You jumped around waaaaay too much, but it's ok.

AGH. it's the last chapter so far. TT darnit.

update soon please?3

the plot is GREAT. i'm absolutely loving it.

i haven't read one like it before. like, seriously.

i'm not saying it for the review or anything.

i'm really serious. :D i absolutely LOVE the plot.

and it's great...so far. ;) just kidding!

hehe, don't let me down! 3

i can't wait to read more!

Wow... I never really bothered to think about it but HunterXHunter is pretty violent. Guess I never noticed because I'm so used to DBZ. Haha. Anyways, awesome job! It's was totally awesome how you made Kurama responsible for all the trouble that is happening. Guess he has another thing to feel guilty about. Also the way you split up the POV's was pretty cool too and thanks for the little bits of Japanese culture. That explanation about how their school works really cleared things up for me. Thanks! Also, please update soon!

-D101

Well THAT was definitely bloody and gory!

Did Yoko seriously gouge out her eyes? Man he was a jerk! But I guess he did have a nasty, merciless streak in him back in the day, huh?

Good chapter though! Poor Kanna! I'm especially feeling bad for the girl that got hacked up! She could probably see herself fighting Toguro and then just got executed with the assassin! THAT is the definition of mad tough!

Heh, also realized that my last review was the end of sophomore year, and now it's the end of my junior year! Haven't taken finals yet, but I think I'm in a better place. Yay, having a working brain! Can't wait til the next update!

Kaori _

You call this chapter boring?

WHAT THE HELLLL?

You MUST UPDATE THE PLOT IS FREAKIN' Amazing!

Yikes that was depressing. I felt like that when a family member died,I was really really close to him,but only a few tears were in my eyes,other then that nothing.

Not until 8 years later I did cry for my loss.

I love your comments in the story they crack me up.

As for depression oh man tell me about it. Back in April I tried to kill myself...again,and ended up in the hospital for two stupid ass weeks. Now I feel REALLY empty and hopeless. Once summer is over I'm going to be a 10th grader,urg...man this is not my year. Ok enough with my annoying nonsense,just please update on your story,it's coming out very well. :)

WHAT? Dead?

Btw My sister is 5 years of age and I'm preety sure she weights more then 34 lbs. She is pretty skinny too. XD

Update!

Ok I almost died of laughter from this

(yeah, Shuuichi's was pretty short but deal with it. Go Google him and drool over his pictures if you want more Kurama-love)

XDDD Man UPDATE! This is getting better and better!

I thought Shuichi was spelled like this?

Oooh Now it's starting to click! Yay!

Oh DANG! Even back then Shuichi was able to sense danger...awesome. XD I keep thinking about his hair and how cute he was when it was short! But he looks hot with it long too. :D Update!

Yeah it is a bit confusing,maybe because of the Japaneses?

Well I still like your story,I think Kurama is well in character.

UPDATE And get over your writer's block!