I don't know if you are still checking this for reviews but I had to write and tell you how much I love this story! You really stuck to the boys' characteristics and personalities. I really like how you rescued Dean. It was very powerful event since Sam saved him. I like it so much better than what actually ended up happening! It's too bad they didn't use your story as the rescue mechanism.
anyway I hope you are doing well !
Maybe you'll get this review and know that someone is still reading these wonderful stories!

Wonderful! I think I like your version better than Eric's!
Dede

OK a shark to a trickster just like that?

Dude, I think that everyone hates hospitals.

Perfect ending! Thank you for making our boys together again:)

Great story, really enjoyed it. Bit spooky how you used Silent Lucidity for this chapter, it was my dad's fave and we played it at his funeral.

all around awesome story!

lol, I loved Bobby's "who?" lol, and the whole Dianna's fingerprints on the knife hadn't even occurred to me until you mentioned it actually, lol

I think that just maybe, this is definitely my favorite chapter so far!

lol, I loved that chapter and I think its awesome that your mom is (or at least was for this story) your editor.

This...was perfect! Thank you!

*HUGS*

Mandy

How can you be so mean to Dean? Uh wait, I like that stuff *tehe*

Very nice panic and toying with Dean that Sam may be near.

Ah... Poor SAMMY!

I love the way he is trying to keep himself together by deflecting tough talk "don't do this again" at Dean.

Wow, nice job! Oh, and about Sam carrying Dean...well, there was this one "behind the scene" scene where Dean jumps into Sam's arms, and Sam carries him for like a second. SQUEAL!

Definately what I was expecting after I read your little two shot about the feelings and thoughts of Samhein's death. Well planned and executed, and leaves the reader wanting to turn the page, or click that little - arrow at the bottom of the screen.

The only real area in this that I can see with room for improvement would be your word choice for Sam when he's talking about torturing Lilith. Sure he wants to rip her apart and maker her beg, but to just come out and say that it gives an upolished air to the dialogue that stands out harshly with the flow and eloquence the rest of the piece has. I don't mean to say that you should make them all speak with British accents and only use words like "pussy feathers" instead of the exempletives we all know and love, but tighten the words themselves.

Well, this is, again, going on my favorite stories list, and I think you've just been added to my favorite authors list as well.

Thanks for sharing, now on to chapter two.

Reincarnated Poet