Oh boy that got intense XD

When he's like "This is usually Raph's job" I get flashbacks to the '87 show's interrogation of Baxter Stockman.
Stockman: Never. I'll never talk.
Raphael: Oh, you'll talk, or else, I'm gonna get *holds up sai* sarcastic.
Never understood that line, but it's damn funny.

Wow. Just wow. This is, to date, the best Turtles story I've read. You have mythology nods, good characterization and a good twist at the end. Strongly recommend.

That was quite glorious. I loved how the guy turned out to be a police officer and was onto their game. Somehow it doesn't surprise me that Don went all 'crazed wacko,' but it was really funny. Great job!

Nice job. I really like how you write Mikey. Don's actions and reactions implied that he wouldn't have made such a "lousy" Bad Cop, (as defined by the officer), if anyone but April had been kidnapped. His actions implied that he sees April as more than just a friend. I love that. ;) Great work, I really enjoyed this.

Elsie

Poor Donnie. But a nice twist ending.

Great story.

For Raph's benefit I'd like to point out that in the Big Brawl arc he played Good Cop while his triceraton friend played the "Hungry-and-going-to-eat-you-if-you-don't-talk" cop.

So Raph can be both good cop and bad cop. :)