Poor John to be so cruel to him, good thing Keller was watching over him so as not to allow him an infection, then they'd all feel bad for harrassing him. Would have loved to see what he did to get even. I bet it was creative.

lol! nice

So...Funny!...ROFLMAO-ing...

ok so this is my first time reading this and they may think this is funny and joke worthy but i have to wonder if they realize it could have been them instead ? :)

That was hilarious! Loved it! Poor John lol

Hilarious! Loved it; you never know - your mind numbing tedious job gives your brain the freedom to do important things, like mentally write fanfic...

You must have been bored silly to think up all those puns. I loved it, although I am now cleaning chocolate from the screen where I was laughing so much!

Very funny! Poor John!

“I have to say, that was the most fantasstic ‘gate entry I’ve ever seen.

haha. Loved the story. Well done.

OMG! THIS WAS GOLD! LMAO! LOVE IT! *giggle fits* Oh hilarious, poor John! Rondey just had to come in with the puns 'rear'ing their ugly heads. I'd love to read more pun-centered fics like this, this was great! Keep up the amazing work!

Hehe! Very good. The puns on the buns at the end had me in stitches! Great job and OUCH! ;)

Well after that, I can't make any more puns, for the buns, but the story was still fun! So I'll just rhyme instead so I can get it out of my head!

That was buttiful! I was behind you all the way! I'll stop there cos it's easy to get carried away (face down!).

oh man, I am hyperventilating from this. Your way with words borders on orgasmically obscene.

I would quote my favorite parts, but that would be just quoting the whole damn story! But rest assured that somewhere between the lines "...pretty much punted through the gate" and "...his first word was, 'Ow.'" I almost sprayed my monitor with Pepsi.

so yeah...I kinda liked it XD