*chews popcorn* Hm. *chews more popcorn* Hmm. *chews even MORE popcorn and gives a disgruntled sigh*

Darn. How I wanted to pick on you about something...and then you go and write a perfect little piece that leaves me absolutely speechless. *poutage* You are so unfair. ;)

I loved this, Zay! I loved the whole kiss, and how GENTLE and CAUTIOUS Jack was with her. *pointed look* The perfect Jack, I think...gone, and yet still keeps a little bit of his humor and carelessness at the end.

Amazing job! And don't you dare argue with me. *pout* That would not be fair. lol

Write more pirates!

*hugs*

Heeheehee, the perverts kissing in front of other crew mates! Shocking!

Nice story, I liked it. Update soon?

-k

love it! this did actually happen btw

I liked this scene much better than the one in the movie, which is saying something, because i absolutely love the movie. You had amazing detail in this.

This is lovely. Probingly gentle.

Nice work. Truthfully. It is wonderful.

God, that was brilliant! Pity that it doesn't happen in reality! Excellent job!

Small explosion? What could that be? -ponders- Is Elizabeth now suicidal? Kidding.

Favorite line;

"...But she had, and here they were, sporting the essence of the other on their sinful lips..."

I don't know why, but I just adored that.

A great drabble love - and it's okay we all have time where we just... write and not work for hours fixing it. I do it all the time.

I totally loved it. You're awsome, this drabble is awsome, the characters were in-character, and the kiss was awsome, and just, you rock. xD

Write more luv. We need genius like this on here.

Luff,

Liz

We all know this is much closer to what should have happened that day!

Nicely written and I enjoyed reading this a lot.

Quite a vignette about quite a kiss!

Cheers!

Nytd

Oh, well done. VERY well done, indeed. This is one of the very few Sparrabeth fics that is both set in-film AND is also good.

"Curiosity is a funny little thing"? I say again, nicely done.

Can't wait to see more from you on this site!