This is the second time I’ve read thisI had lost it and couldn’t find it for a whileand I still enjoyed just as much as the first time. Even though, I have to be honest, when I read it this time, and please don’t take offense to this because I’m just speaking my thoughts, I didn’t really like Kori that much. Not the way she was written, but the way she just constantly disrespected Raven by putting her in an uncomfortable situation just because it suited her. I mean 1. She invited three strange men within an hour of meeting them to live in their house for the summer that they (the girls) paid for themselves, and even after Raven told her she didn’t want them there. And after we learn of Raven’s reason for her distrust in men, it seemed like an inconsiderate thing to do on Kori’s part. 2. She invited Tara! Even though ALL her friends knew it was a bad idea, even though Tara had landed Raven in the hospital, she still thought it was a good idea to have her around? 3. Even though it was agreed that it would stay between her and Gar, Kori still told him about Raven’s past with Malchior. Yes, it moved the story along, but another inconsiderate thing to do. Don’t get me wrong, some girls are like thatthinking they’re doing the right thing, but it’s more for them to feel better than really thinking of othersbut I actually felt bad for Raven for having a “friend” that would constantly throw her choices out the window...

Still enjoyed the story, one of my favs, this was just one of those things that I noticed the second time around!

Reading this again, and it feels like the first time. I love it! I wish you had added another chapter or so, but it's beautiful regardless. Thank you.

The ending was rushed. I really think you should have taken your time to give it the ending it deserved. I understand the desire to end something and move on but sometimes no ending at all is better than ending on a low note. It wasn't bad, but the entire thing was leading up to some real moments that you never went into. it could have been so much more. either way thank you for the entertainment and heart of this story. I devoured it on one day. yay long commutes.

7 years later from reading this for the first time and still amazing. I wish you had written after the beach house and how their relationship developed. Your writing and portrayal of BBRae is phenomenal :)

Wish there would have been more BBRae interaction after they got together. But I get it. Anyways, despite me thinking that Raven could be way too harsh at times, this was a very nice story. I really enjoyed it!

FINALLY!

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DANG IT!

Eff that. I would have curb stomped that ho. I despise her. She needs to be locked away somewhere.

Yay Terra hate! I hate her too!

Raven needs some dick. For real. Loosen up girl.

She's like extra mean in this story...

That was adorable!

Awesome story. So fascinating and exciting. Love it.

I just reread this after so many years. It is still very good. I hope that maybe one day you add a chapter or two with more detail about what happened after. If you don't it's fine. just wanted to let you know this story has a special place in my heart. It was the first fanfic I ever read and actually liked. So thanks.