Great story! Would love more...please?

I really love this fanfiction, if you decide to write more I would love to read it.

Please, please, PLEASE finish this story!

What a great story! You built the tension between them perfectly - especially effective when it spills over in chapter 4. I'm glad I read it, even if it isn't finished.

Yeah, you hadnt updated for a long while now, but will you continue?

I wonder which her gesture is. You mentioned it, so you already knew it as you wrote it.

Please, let us know what you meant.

Thank you for wtiting it.

I know I've already reviewed this fic, but it's brilliant so I'm giving it another one. I also know that you haven't updated in nearly two years now, but, is there any chance of ever seeing chapter six, etc. etc? Or an email of a half completed chapter? The place wheee you've left it is so infuriating!

Your Story is just bloody perfect!

I even can imagine this situation between the two of them.

Please, please write on and update the next chap!

I would love it to go on.

:)

This is a beautiful story and I hope that you finish it.

Wow, what an amazing story, and writer you are!

I know that I'm probably clutching at straws seeing as you haven't updated in two years, but, is there any chance of an update? You can't just leave it like that!

This is my new fandom and there is just not enough fic to go around! You have picked a great moment from the series to diverge off with a lovely story.

Please write more, more, more!

I really enjoyed your story - but would love to see what happens next! Are you going to continue? Please do!

Oh you suck. OH YOU SUCK! Update update! Wants to know what happens!

Please tell me theres some more coming to this one...I really need to know what happens between them!

That ep is one of my favourites between the pair of them so I'm so glad you've taken to carrying it on!

Love it!

Gem x

Oh, this is such a cute story! I hope you will write more chapters and not leave me hanging like this :)

Oh- this is brilliant! So well written!

I love the show and the books and I find it impressive how you keep Tony and Carol so very much in character while at the same time throwing them into a scenario that I'd personally deem quite unlikely to happen in the books and in the show.

Val would be proud of you. ;-)

Please continue very soon!