I love the story!

i havnt read a story this good in a LONG time

that was amazing! i loved the end where sonic won the bet.

keep writing (ur obviously good at it)

That was genius. :O

Wow this is really cool, but when Shadow is 'killed', he says "Oof" the dead don't talk unless they're in hell/heaven(sorry I'm christian). When Mecha is beating Shadow up, he gets slammed into the floor. I noticed you really like to slam him into concreate floors In this story and in the story "The Rise of Pyro". Well, otherwise your story is really good keep writing. I left you a review as 'One Way' I still want to read what happens. Keep up the good work!

-Jess

Sword: Cool, cool, cool!

Pen: I must agree. This was a rather good story. Good action sequences and an overall good plot.

Sword:...

Pen: Oh right. En garde!

I'm strongly impressed. It seems every other fanfiction I see, especially ones pertaining to certain pairings, are nothing but fluff and characters severely OOC. Also, descriptions are static and have no balance of action, comedy, and romance. Yet, you seem to blend them all together magnificently.

Great job is all I can say. It's not every day that you find a fanfiction like this. :)

I bet it's Jimmy the blue Octopus! No, no it's probably knuckles.

Yay! Shadows angry! Nice chapter, glad you finally updated...but I have a question. Why would Maria be in the field? Shes human...so wouldn't she go to heaven? Not that it really matters, since it was really cute, but just wondering...

Oh SNAPS! lol. Didn't see that coming - Shadow actually being dead there for a bit. But the bit with Maria was very sweet :)

Die, Mecha, ye mortal fool!

Jeez it took ya long enough, but any how that was a good chapter.

great story! i cant stop reading it! update it soon!

*gasp* Shadow! How could you! You have to update now!

Hey man it was good don't worry you'll be better in notime all it takes is extreme challenges. take it to the extreme bro! have fun with writing your next one because I'll have fun reading next! please! Also, please review my stories. thx, love peace.

I really like this! I can't wait to see where this is going.