This is really good. Having no name was a little aggravating but interesting at the same time. Can't wait for the next update, again really good. But, when Joker talks he adds an extra syllable.
Example:
"Hello Doc-ah how are you doing-ah?"
It gives more of a Joker-like feel.
-Sycx Assassin

Most Joker fanfics are good, but it only takes about, hmmm- halfway through the first chapter until he is nothing like he is portrayed in the movie. This was awesome! It's done so well! Good job!

Ahhh! That was so good! I had a suspicion she would die... You potray Joker very well.

Extremely talented work here.

wow. This is actually so amazing! I can't believe I only just found it! Omg! You've kept the Joker in character...one of the best interpretations of the Joker ever! I love your OC as well...pity she had to die...ah well I think the Joker needed to kill her off because she knew too much. There's absolutely nothing wrong with this lil one shot! I love it! Amazing job!

I thought it began woderfuly but I thought it was going to continue. I do think that the joker became a little out of character in the end and in most circumstances would not have killed the woman

I know i'm years too late but just wanted to say how much i enjoyed this fic - really excellent writing & very well done on keeping the joker in character. Great work & very much enjoyed - thank you!

This was absolutely fantastic, one of the best Dark Knight fics I've read in a long, long time. Your writing is remarkable, and you obviously have been blessed with the talent for it. Everything flowed smoothly and the narrator's voice was perfect.

This whole one-shot was perfectly gritty and fantastically wonderful. I have no complaints. Amazing job.

Most Sincerely,

HoistTheColours

YES! Another non-cheesy Joker fic! That's 3 so far. XD

I really loved this! Everything was so real, like it is very possible that that same scene would happen if the Joker was to run across her. It's really a good fic. It's refreshing to read a great fic about the Joker that doesn't involve an oc romance... they're great every once in awhile, but just about ev-er-y where you look it's gotta be an ocXjoker (not to be confused with a harley quinnXjoker :D). I love how real this seems. Really, good job. ;)

nice

Ooo, beautifull. Joker is VERY in character and your dialouge is splendid.

Good lord, that is amazing.

the Joker is, in my opinion, perfectly in character.

I enjoyed the story, like, a lot.

Please, write more, please.

I think you did a wonderful portayal of the Joker's thought pattern, actions, and speach.

Aww, the Joker finished her off...And she was doing so well...-pouts- Gosh, she's got talent, keeping calm around him. Either I would collapse from fear, or just freak out in excitement because I'm in the same room as one of my very favorite villains ever!

Anyways, you did a great job with this story. The Joker was wonderfully in character, well done! -applauds- And your OC was excellent, too. I liked 'em all. Great style, the story flows well. A pleasure to read!

Truest,

~ShatteredBlackHeart

Very Intense! I loved it

Keep Writing

SileaLove