hello,

I visite your profile and I find out that you are the type that suit my heart, which am seeking for, I hope and believe we will walk it out for heart desier, let come out for something good for our love, i believe someone with good zeal, someone who knows what is love and you are the type, when replying contact me through my e-mail adddress. () Iam waiting for the love.

Iam vivian

"You're not still sore about the hand are you?"

Did you steal that from the video game?

I only recognise it cos I had to play that bit about six hundred times.

Love this story, please update soon! - Emma

I just read all the chapters for a refresher and dang! It's long and full of plot.

Please up-date soon. I can't wait to read more.

you have to write more I love it ! just letting you know I would like to see May become a little more of a though girl and at some point possibley even save Griffin once for a change if you get my drift just a suggestion. :)

-cheers

p.s. I think that now would also be a perfect time to slowly start making some action happen between May and Griffin

love the story! i hope you update soon!

Nice! Poor May. *Sadface*

This is a good story. I hope you keep going with it.

loving this story! and i would like to see the pics. of May and Alan.

Aww... She got separated from Griffin! Can't way for hers and Alan's reunion! Should be fun, yeah?

Keep up the good work, and I do hope things begin to look up for you.

Best of luck and happy holidays,

Scitah

Aw. I'm sure David was like "Wth?" when she didn't stay with him. Made me laugh.

Keep up the good work and take your time!

Lovely chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Oh... Fun stuff!

Poor Alen. He makes me want to hug him and tell him it's all right.

You might want to pay a little more attention to your punctuation.