Ok, it may be a small thing..but Bella thinking about packing up the snow gear when she was living in Phoenix? A place that actually averages 0" a year?!

So let me begin with saying that I'm glad I didn't read this as it was being posted. I would not be able to take all the waiting there seemed to be. Some of the authors notes made the author seem less...likeable I guess would be the best way to put it. Also saying that your interest in twilight was fading made it seem like you were losing motivation and I expected the story to suffer because of it. There were things that repeated often, words that were used too many times in a single paragraph and such. And there were many parts of the story that got confusing. Example would be how Bella and Jacob were in the house and suddenly he was playing with the sand. Or how things happened early on and then they suddenly didn't happen later. Anyway dispite all the flaws it was a good story and I read it in less than two days.

I love your work work

love this!

like your sorry so far! ! can't put it down!

AMAZING STORY.

Hi. I love your story. I'm on chapter 26, only 10 more to go. This is a really great story. Can't wait to finish it.
Love,
Jayda

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This story is awesome! I love it! I'm not done yet, I'm at the part when Jacob agrees to take Bella cliff diving. I can't wait to finish it.

This story takes forever to get started so fault I'm not impressed I've read other Jake and Bella imprint stories that don't use the plot of the story and make the love struck Bella present. Rather see Bella being more of a bad ass instead a sacred shrew.

Thanks for a good read. I enjoyed your not-so-wimpy Bella.

Uh-oh, are you sure it's the guidance counsellor Bella!? Maybe it's one of Victoria's pals...

Poor Jake. The pack doesn't seem to be keeping Victoria off tribal land. Why aren't they trying to get her? I hope Billy is ok.

I don't get it. Why haven't the pack come to deal with Victoria..isn't she a red-eyed vamp? Wouldn't she have to be somewhere close by after school hours? If she has a teaching position she has to have a home base to take care of her laundry and her person, she can't be living in the woods and looking feral. They know where she's going to be each day. So why not try to take her out?

Great start.
I can't believe anyone giving you flak for a Jake/ Bella pairing. Who in their right mind would choose to be with a wimpy blood drinking vampire over warm, lovely Jake? Anyway, isn't this the point of fan fiction? Being able to look at the story from a different angle?