That was simply beautiful.

This was beautifully crafted! I think I was holding my breath the entire time I was reading it.

Good one-shot. )

Wow just wow, loved what aang wrote oh my god, so sweet

Ooooh god, this made me shiver. I just love the intimacy and sensuality of it all. I think this shall be one of my all time favorites.

This story made me blush. I've kind of done the same thing, written stories, compositions, journals, and have been very selective about my better half reading them. I would love to be so open, but it's like baring your soul to someone, and it's hard to know if the other person will take advantage of that vulnerability.

Beautiful story! Thanks for writing!

Y'gads your writing, girl! .

This was beautiful, and I loved reading the evolution of Katara's writing. You have a wonderful grasp on the characters, especially Aang and his deep spiritual side.

Very interesting fic, almost poetic, very nice! Well done :D

haha...

reading this made me think that i suck at compositions...

great story...

i rate it 10/10...

That was so sweet and awe-inspiring at the same time. I dont think Ive read something so elegant and graceful. I want to read it over and over, trying to comprehend the spiritual energy emanating from this piece of writing. A perfect ending to a perfect story.

Ek! This is so beautiful! I love Aang and his suggestion and how he wrote about her too and it was so soul-matey! And deep and awesome. The very last paragraph seemed a little out of place, since it was basically a summary of what was already presented. But other than that? Love this piece!

This was so sweet! I only wish I could read all of the glorious observations that Katara made of Aang. The ones you described were fantastic. Well done, short and sweet. A great composition ;)

Why is this oneshot so frustratingly cute? Argh...

Loved it! ;-*

Wonderfully written!