Reviews for Intense
goldiloks chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
-SQUEE!-

oh i so love it.

you worked the concept in beautifully and seemingly effortlessly.

i... just... wow. it's so in character! like, that last line just has to be exatly what the writers think about them every week as they contemplate the next episode.

bravo.
Charmed225 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Awesome! I love it :D
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Brilliant! I really enjoyed it! Wonderful interactions and banter! Perfect!
x.Deleted.x2011 chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Hey!

This was really good, really well written.

I loved it! Especially the 'To Do List' and Cuddy's response to it as well as the NSYNC thing. Good job with the transitions too.

Great fic, keep on writing! ]
raffinit chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Now, I've got a feeling you've been readin CSIClue's Sizzle. Have you? hm because i noticed a taint of CSIClue in there, y'know, with 'the fetish of dark, curly hair' and whatnot. very very good writing by the way. i think it even deserves a Brilliant. )
Tokyo's Angel chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Favorite line: "Grabbing his new, completely non-bitchin' cane" I miss House's badass cane.

Love the insight into the House/Cuddy relationship, especially with how well Cuddy takes care of House.

Great job! :)

Also, what I find infinitely hilarious is the fact that the ad at the bottom of the page, when I went to click "submit review" was a "Which House M.D. character are you?" quiz link, with House and Cuddy on the link image. At least that's what it was on this cycle of ads. :D
murphycat chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Extremely well done! Good job with the dialogue. Hope there is more. :D
Casper1311 chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
I knew you were one of my favorite authors for a reason!

This has been a wonderful and amazing story. An instant favorite. The structure, the language ... I'm swooning over here in Germany! :D

I hope we'll see more of your talent in the future.

PLEASE! ;)
Spectral Scribe chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Wow. This is an absolutely perfect look at House and Cuddy's relationship. I don't ship, but if I did, it would be House/Cuddy, but only if explored well. I like how you explore their feelings for one another, the complexities of their relationship, and all of that. This is a lovely fic. It's well written, and I just can't get over how well you grasped their immensely complex relationship and put it to words. Plus there are a few parts that made me laugh out loud, like what House added to the list, him saying he had to watch TV for his healing process, not knowing the five members of NSYNC, and that Chase is hacking into the clinic schedule database. I loved this bit:

"They disliked one another so much, and yet they took care of each other and protected each other and...and used coasters for each other."

What a great fic. A wonderful, realistic, in-character look into their lives post-Amber and their relationship. Well done!
sinkfloridasink chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Oh, this was wonderful (:

I hardly have words.

It's been a long time since a House/Cuddy fic has incited my senses so incredibly that I keep having to get up and down from the computer in order to properly read the story. (And yes - that's a compliment.)

Very, very good (: Keep up the good work!
Skylarcat chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Every morning, he was both exasperated to find her still annoying him with her presence and terrified that one day she wouldn't be.

I really, really liked that line.

he handed her the front page whilst keeping the comics and crossword puzzle for himself.

AW! :)

Cameron had once caught him in the middle of Oprah and had decided she wanted to "discuss it."

Okay...LMFAO!

Cuddy was still definitely naked.

*Snorts*

for what would happen if someday he would just let himself fall...

I am liking this!

5. House. Che...Huh?

LOL! That he put himself on her to "DO" list!

Getting up now would be detrimental to my healing process."

House, using her own words to get her! LOL!

"I completed number five on the list twenty years ago," she answered without so much as looking up from her book.

Score one for Cuddy! LOL!

"Would you punish me if I didn't?"

And House comes back with one of his own! NICE.

It was simple. It was complex. It was theirs.

*Smiles* I really liked your piece here. :)