Your humble reader is grinning like a Cheshire cat. Caramba, but did you open a can of worms. And you know what? Rye says props again. He himself is working on a story of cousin love, based on some fan-art at Deviant Art. A trip to various websites about that subject was most eye-opening. It’s much more common than thought. & I’m not talking Jeff Foxworthy-straight-line-family-tree-them-thar-hills kinda couples. Johann Sebastian Bach, Werner von Braun, Charles Darwin, Albert Einstein, Rudy Giuliani, Jessie James, Mary and Joseph, FDR…you get my drift. Moi, being a Born Again Bible Thumper, finds this less objectionable than same gender couples. This may not do much for my review as a ringing endorsement of this chpt.

& hey…if cpneb gave you the nod, it’s all good.

Somehow this became my story du jour. I’ve mentioned Charlie Chaplin in a couple of other reviews. This brings it home. Or maybe even someone more pitiful. Of the top of my head, I’m thinking Deputy Sherriff Barney Fife, the Don Knotts char from Andy Grifith of Mayberry (Me & old shows; it might be a Baby Boomer thing) I grieve for the *other* Ron. Here’s someone who might even benefit from Wade Load’s Love Ray and Ron Stoppable’s romance advice.

Whether it was Lipsky, Demense, or Lurman, CajunBear speaks for me. “…but noooo…" Most def. Francis Lurman

I like this chpt. Uplifting, I call it. I've spent the day reading Count of Monte Cristo and watching Charlie Chaplin flicks. So I'm in that kinda mood. Like standing up for all the downtrodden of the world. Sweet and wimsical. We hope Bonnie and Jr. get the message before they turn 50 something. Coco & Rye say props.

Damn it! I spoke too soon.

BAH! That one was steamy evil.

Nice collection of awk-wierd. Who was that meant to be that Mon kissed?

Now THAT'S a new pairing.

Nice dialogue, funny idea, good stuff. Wrong, but good.

Aw, man, this was just awesome XD Thank you for writing this, I definitely had a great time reading it. The humor is great, and I just kept cracking up - it's definitely one of the funniest fics I've read lately.

I loved every chapter, though I think my favorite ones were the one with Drakken and Motor Ed, the one with Dementor and Killigan (man, I couldn't stop laughing after reading the last line XD) and the one about Senior Senior Sr and Mama Lipsky. Awesome!

*faves*

Funny, but I kind of don't get it.

Well, this definitely goes on my "odd pairings" list. :D

God, for a minute there, I thought he was asking for a threesome. LOL. Good job.

Potatoes...not just for dinner anymore.

So what size of a potato did he get...a new potato?

EW!

You're sick and wrong!

*Takes a beating stick... then drops it*

But that's SO funny!

As Ron said in "Bad Boy","It's going to be spudtacular!"

Neo...

I am glad to be among the 'growing list'. It was nice and vague, until the time of the 'big reveal'.

However, if I may offer a suggestion, you should have been more specific about being in the Produce section AFTER the 'reveal' was made. I think, with another day to look it over, you would have worked out that kink.

All in all, though, this is STILL a good chapter, and fits quite well with the collection you have amassed so far.

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird