Lol. I love how you made Jak's mom. I always figured Damas domesticated after he got married, but this makes more sense. I love your story!

please don't tell me this is the end I love this story please make another

wow I love this.

Please say your going to write more.

Oh man, you're too much! XD You write such funny stuff! I've actually put that 'Time to blow some shit up... again.' line on my favorite quotes list. Though there's alot more I want to put on. That last bit about crashing and the 'fucking domesticated tank' was amazing.

Kina is awesome!Please update,I want know how she reacts to the Precursors!Oh,and one more the hell is swirly-logic?

Love! Must update asap!

oh

Vegs, ya just shot your self in the-

Lovely! I'm glad you're continuing this!

*grin*

Kina's take on the armored vehicle is win. and Jak's crack about him getting his mental satbility from his mother made me snort D.P. out my nose the first Time I read that.

I just wanna know if you'll write more with the following:

the scene with Veger

the revilation of the Precursers

and the reaction of the others to not only Jak being Mar, but their reaction to his mother

so varah shinny! more soon please?

ya know? I've read this 4 times in the last two days, and it still makes me snicker.

where is The Three Relms did you come up with the term "Swirly Logic" and may I use it in my fics?