i would request you to give more description towards sasuke as naruto's story is dumber than a brick and his naivety in everything doesn't present much avenue to story
and with sasuke's analysis and factuality it will give his village more power , people like naruto can be hokage only at times of peace.

Really enjoyed the story. Too bad that it's been a while since your last update.

I understand that you're writing this story as realistically as you can an idea can see that, too.

But I must say that Hashirama Senju would never practice slavery. Especially taking a sex slave. He an idealist for love and peace. He was almost as bad as Naruto. He's what Naruto probably would have been if he'd grown up in an era of war.

I do like that you got him right as a bit of an oddball, though. Very good there.

Also Naruto didn't just have increased healing abilities from the fox. He also has his Uzumaki genes to thank. He should also have a bit more chakra thanks to that.

It was a bit to realistic for me but I did like the idea and your writing was good.
Take the Good Person Test (fourth result on a Google search).

Goodwork!

I like it So far. Keep up to good work!

Causality (also referred to as causation) is the relationship between an event (the cause) and a second event (the effect), where the second event is understood as a consequence of the first.
vs.
Casualty (person), a person who is killed or injured in a war or disaster.

Considering the update date, this review probably won't even be noticed, but this misprint is hilarious to my tired mind, up there with my favourite " delirious potatoes " .

nice start to the story I can't believe Naruto and Sasuke are basically remaking the entire shinobi world with themselves at the center ;)

Great Story, Wish you would update.

If I were Naruto I would scout out both Clans and also the Uzumaki clan and then choose and one of the first things I would ask Madara and Sasuke is why and did they know that Hashirama was such a cunt

Interesting idea - a timetravel story that sends them this far back to the past! XD

please please please continue epic story, well written and very very unique!

nice

you gonna continue this story?

Ooooh, I'd like to see more of this, it's a unique idea.

Cool dude, hoping to read more. Update soon, k?