| Reviews for Honor |
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46677755 chapter 1 . 7/26/2010 Sad. But since I've been strangely moody since I've been deprived of caffeine and chocolate... Dang it. Ja mata ne, Yumi |
LM22102 chapter 1 . 8/18/2009 Fack, that was sad. You bastard! |
Rulisu chapter 1 . 8/12/2009 I'm officially addicted to your work. Which is BAD, considering I have to wake up in three hours. HOWEVER! This one wanted to make me slam my head off the desk. In a good way, of course. It takes most writers pages upon pages of character development and pointless spew to make a death have impact (guilty!), but you've acheived so much with so little. It's amazing! |
Foxthefox chapter 1 . 8/18/2008 Another Review from me. This fic was actually pretty sad. Hehe it depressed me, it was still a very good fic. Fox |
lonelyassassin chapter 1 . 8/13/2008 *crys* That was sad. Good, but sad. In other news. I have to start school tomorrow. *sobs* I don't wanna go to school! |
misikoblossom chapter 1 . 7/28/2008 Well, I can't say this fic is mediocre, because it's anything but that, but I really have to be honest in my reviewing. That said, let's start with the positives: Yuffie's characterization in the beginning was excellent. You used just a few paragraphs to describe her sitation, and though not all plot holes were filled (ex..was that Vincent's child in her womb?), that only contributed to the air of "mysteriousness" and "tragedy" about her. Good! I did feel a slight sense of sympathy for Yuffie (although her suicide, to be honest, didn't really resound with me too much). However...as for Vincent's sudden death at the end, I was just...befuddled. He kills himself? Huh? There's were certain implications that Yuffie loved Vincent and vice versa, but out of the blue, he goes and kills himself? While I understand what "true love" does to you and all, personally I couldn't see Vincent committing suicide for his (potentially) unborn child or his "secret lover". Take Lucrecia, for example...rather than suicide he chose to lock himself up in a coffin for 30 years. Maybe he and Yuffie have a connection an' all...but to be frank I really can't see that happening. Otherwise, I did enjoy this. Like the writing style, hope to see some more fics from you in the future! |
t3h maniac chapter 1 . 7/24/2008 *sniff* I promised myself I wouldn't cry *sniff*... |
Serenitychan13 chapter 1 . 7/24/2008 *shakes you back and forth* WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY! *bawls* Reno: *glares at AT* You made Niki-chan cry! Vincent: *sniffles a little* Yuffie: *waves shuriken* Y'ALL! I'm NOT DEAD! I'm kinda, you know, OVER HEAR! Vincent: *is emo* Everyone: *bops Vincent for being emo* Rude: *punches Reno* Reno: WE WEREN'T EVEN IN THIS FIC! WHY! |
dantesdarkqueen chapter 1 . 7/24/2008 Sorrowful and ironic. That's all I can say. Masterfully done, my fellow Queen. Tearfully awesome! -Queen |
heaven-monument chapter 1 . 7/24/2008 Wow. Really, um, fascinating. Words can't describe it... if I say I enjoyed it, will you hold it against me? I personally am not a fan of UBER-DARK-DEATH-ANGST-SUICIDEZORZ fics, but I can always make an exception. ~HM |
NoBuddy chapter 1 . 7/23/2008 Oh boy, that sucks! Not your writing, which is as good as always, but the thing in itself! Geez, it just sucks big time! Such a meaningless death in the end! Duh! I never cared too much for Yuffie, but poor her... |
MysticSpiritus chapter 1 . 7/23/2008 *wails* ... *buries head in your shoulder* Mystic |