while i enjoyed this story i feel that some things were rushed and could have been delved into a bit better i.e harrys parentage. i also don't get how the kids can be all the same age?are the triplets?doesn't make sence. but i liked the idea of it

I have two problems with this chapter, 1 Ginny isn't Teddie's godmother he was never appointed on by his parents, 2 Teddie can't be the same age and thus same year at Hogwarts as Harry and Ginny's kids because he was born during the tail end of the war and thus would have to be at least a year older than them if you're pushing Harry and Ginny marrying within six months to a year since the war ended.

It would have been perfectly fine to close the gap by making him only two years older than all three of Harry and Ginny's kids and making Harry and Ginny's kids fraternal triplets (allows for James Sirius and Albus Severus to look different while still being born at the same time and for Lily Luna to still be the same age as them since they'd all come from the same pregnancy like this).

It would've also lined nicely with Scorpius Hyperion if you wanted him in the same year and at the same age as Harry and Ginny's trio since two years after the war would've been long enough for Draco to settle his post war woes, court and marry Astoria, and have a amicable or bitter divorce sometime during the decade after Scorpius was born.

love it please write more

Please let there be a sequel

BAWHAHAHAHA OH MAN this so funny nice one

I must say this story in trigued me on several levels.
Very entertaining, sweet and romantic.
Thank you for sharing.

the writer uses the word tend way to much they need to mix it up

So... They've been friends for two weeks? And dating maybe three days? And now marriage? I get moving the story fast but come on.

One, the hat talks inside people's heads not out load when sorting. Two: Harry is in charge, he knows who is who in the school. He pays them from the schools account. The constant using of Harry and Drake's (shudder - personal preference with that) names while they talk is very unrealistic. Do you say your friends name over and over when you are talking to them?
I like the plot of your story so far and will continue to read.

Firstly it's Hermione not Hermoine. Secondly, very confused about the ages of the children. Suddenly all three kids are going to Hogwarts for the first time? They're not all 11. It's physically impossible to have three kids all born in the same year from the same mother unless they're triplets or two of them are twins, and normally if two are born in the same calendar year, they'll be in different academic years due to the UK system being 1st September-31st August. Plus, we know that they're in different years due to the epilogue, and you've even stated that Albus is Harry's middle child. Lily acts far younger than she is in the first chapter if she's meant to be 11; she acts more like she's 7 or 8, especially by needing a footstool, though I guess she could just be short. And Teddy would be waaaaaay older than a second year; he was born in Harry's 7th year, and Albus was just going off to Hogwarts 19 years later, which means Albus was born 8 years after Teddy was, so Teddy would be out of school by this point. You don't even need to look up birth dates online to know that the timeline is just all messed up and I get that this is fanfiction and you can write however you want to, but warn for this kind of stuff because if I knew it was going to be THIS AU from the books then I wouldn't have bothered starting it.

Absolutely, beautiful. I am impressed with your skill as an author.

LOVE IT!

confused on the ages of the kids are they preteens are younger because lily seems 5 not 11

Wow ron was kind of an ass to an innocent kid scorpious didnt do anything

Sequel please!