| Reviews for Pain |
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   schizelle chapter 1 . 3/30/2017 Well. That's something. O.o The ending was so unexpected, but I guess you meant for it to be like that. I really like it! :D |
| kitten chapter 1 . 4/21/2012 pffffffffffffffft i laughed so hard when Bens like: 'your sick, both of you' XD |
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 2/16/2010 LOL. Loved this. |
| Defying.Expectations chapter 1 . 11/28/2009 AHA! That was brilliant. "Foreplay" . . . most authors seem to think that Albert was on the boring side. Guess not. ;D |
| Falling Stardust chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 Weird...Aww, Benjamin's possessive of his razors, too! |
| Ratty Darling chapter 1 . 8/23/2008 Holy hot banana's! That was hot! lol XD "it was... foreplay." HA HA HA. Well done. |
| HelenaStaple chapter 1 . 8/21/2008 Hee hee, I NEVER would have expected that ending! That was just brilliant. I'm speechless. |
| lrr chapter 1 . 8/19/2008 Yes that's right. They're MY rasors. See? -holds them up- They glisten ever so much... This was awesome! |
| Loveless-Forever-in-the-dark chapter 1 . 8/2/2008 And I thought it was Sweeney threatening her xD Nice ] |
| addictedtofantasy chapter 1 . 7/30/2008 Ha! Well, that explains a lot... |
| ff345 chapter 1 . 7/26/2008 LOL! That was great, so not what I was expecting lol! |
| tttttttttttttt chapter 1 . 7/24/2008 That was really intense. I like it a lot. xD Definitely a nice twist at the end. It's interesting to see how the world turns a full-circle and we come back to the same old thing. What an awkward interruption that would be, though. -rofl- Anyways, very good job. I like it a lot. |
| Ryoko368 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008 Interesting twist that it was Albert and not Sweeney. Good story! |
| Obscure Bird chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! |
| AngelofDarkness1605 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008 Wow, I did't see THAT coming. Great work! |
