This was such a great story! I’m usually not much of a Harry/Hermione shipper but this was very well done. I love that there wasn’t unnecessarily extended drama with Ron and that Ginny wasn’t secretly pining for Harry. The mystery itself was great too - the crime was (satisfyingly) gory and while she wasn’t really a sympathetic character, I found myself wishing Harry could’ve waited a week before arresting her. Awesome job! 3

Andersen is the GOAT

Really cute. I like that Ron wasn't a butt like in so many other HHr fics. Well written, good plot, not super predictable. I also enjoyed the flashback scenes- your style of writing is fun to read. Great story!

never read a HP/bones story where the two are one and not separate

I just finished your story and I must say it is absolutely brilliant! I have been looking all over the internet for a HarryxHermione fanfic like this. I do love me some mystery, investigations, and, of course, romance. Add to that the psychology stuff, which I also love. Yours fit the bill and more!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for making my day!

Not sure with to continue reading thought this was a HHr story but she's eoth Ron, if she only gets together with Harry for the last chapter I'd feel cheated.

Personally idk how u can call that a sex scene as there wasn't any sex to be seen, but it is actually pretty good for a first attempt and better than some i have read bc u didnt leave it at completly ambigiousness as far as whether or not they did have sex like some authors that are more rule following on here. Though I think u could have gotten away with some oral action with out getting into trouble

You kinda gave away one of ur author name challenge questions with this chapter, though ludlum is arguably the most renown of the names so far (at least I think so BC everyone probably knows of the Bourne trilogy) so I don't think it was much of a spoiler

Lol I guess I'm not the only one that thought 'Bones' was similar.

So far I am seeing similarities between this and the Fox show 'Bones'. Out of curiosity was that intentional or was it a coincedence

I'll be blunt and frank-this is the best fanfic I've ever read yet! I actually signed up just to post this review. The flashbacks intertwining with the main storyline really does the trick, especially those parts of Doc Andersen trying to prompt Harry to admit his feelings. A flashback just whenever the text gets too long... AAARRRRRGGHHHHHH! THX GOD FOR THE 29 CHAPTERS! 3 cheers for HARMONY!

This was a great story.

Linking the flashbacks within, worked really well for me.
The dynamic changes of the characters was well thought out and fit neatly into how you obviously wanted it to go. The underlying CSI/Law and Order angle was a touch that I have not come across on this board before and added depth, that normally goes missing in Harry and Hermione get togethers.

Just a final note, the scene after the blow up at the Burrow where they finally move to the next stage and give in to each other was just what it needed. Any more and it would have probably just seemed wrong. Often not having all the details spelt out leaves the story better for it, well done on resisting the temptation to over indulge, I think it works alot better this way.

Thanks for writing this for us to read.

A 147 reviews for a 29 chapter story is alot better than most of the stories on this site get, so don't be to down it's a good story.

There's to many of these past reflections btween Harry and his phych., I see why they are there but I just don't see the need for them in every chaptor. To me it kind of get's in the way of the overall flow of a otherwise great story.

That therapist reminds me of Gordon Gordon White... from the Bones series... and I have to wonder if that's on purpose. He's good. The story is awesome, I was completely sucked in, and the koalas approve.