Beautiful!

Sooooooo cuuuuuuteeeeeeeee! I think three quarters of my classmates are left-handed, though. XD I'm right-handed, but I kick with my left foot (mom says I'm weird).

*Ahem* First of all, I loved how both of them were left-handed, especially Kurogane. I'm also left handed myself so naturally the pride kicks in and I think it's wonderful when amazing characters like Fai and Kurogane (especially Kurogane) are portrayed as left handed.

I like how the real-world superstitions of leftiness being a bad/evil/malicious sign is carried on in the series. I wouldn't be surprised if those ones exist in the worlds they come from and go to.

Fai's internal thoughts and the things and feelings he try to hide were written very well. I think you got his characterization down very well - especially in the parts leading up to the tragedies in Acid Tokyo. I had to admit it was heartbreakingly intense when Kurogane goes "you're left handed" in Infinity and Fai angrily rips apart his list. And the beautiful and utterly emotional revelations Fai come to when Kurogane sacrificed his dominant arm was breath taking. I was tearing up. I loved the private exchange they had before going to visit Syaoran and Sakura.

Marvelous work!

i liked it and u really had me goin there for a bit

...are either of them actually left handed though? i cant remember

either way it was a good oneshot and though i made sure to check the word countbefre reading it felt a lot longer than expected

not a complaint mind u

!_!

Hurray! I'm a leftie!

20% of the world's population is left handed (I know cause I'm one of them).

anyways cute story, I enjoyed reading it

Hey there! :D

I loved this story, it was beautiful! Actually, you did quite well with your "fake plot", though the smooching in the end was a bit distracting, as it got so long. But, anyways, I really, really liked it. I adored how you led us through Fai and Kurogane's emotions and perception towards the different canon scenes. That was really very well done. Also the end was very cute, though it got a bit repetitive - they kept smiling and kissing and smiling and kissing and smiling... but anyways, it was very cute and I enjoyed it as well. :) I loved it! :D

Ah! I like this! I never mind revisiting my favorite kurofai moments of the series with a new twist added on. _~ And you know, I kind of think Fai is a lefty too.

I'm left-handed too! Fai's probably right-handed though, he drew his cute little doggy and kitty pictures in oto with his right hand... This was a pretty good "what if" sort of situation, though!

Beautiful, thank you for writing such a wonderful fic. It highlighted that brief period of Fai's changed attitude- I felt that perhaps Fai felt a slight resentment toward Kurogane. I prefer you explaination and reasoning much better. Very good work.

haha i was rofling by the end, loved kuro-pon's line at the end, about fai jumping on him :)

KUROGANE'S NOT GAY, HE'S FAISEXUAL!

I really loved it. You did a wonderful job with this one. And it almost seems believable. KuroFay in it's full form...and don't worry, the ending was perfectly fine. Thanks for writing this and keep up the good work.

Beautifully written and an interesting interpretation of Fai. Wonderfully done. Everyone was extremely in character and I really loved it.

Good job on word choice, character interaction, and imagery. I thought the ending was sweet. X3

I'm left-handed too! :D

Corrections:

"...especially when his whole body shakes from suppressed emotion, as though silent sobs rack his body." Shouldn't it be racked?

"And he would have, Fai swears he would have just let everything end if that man hadn’t grabbed the mage’s blood-spattered hand with his own and ordered him no to harm anyone else," No should be not.

"...the mage asked only half-jokingly, concern lacing in his voice." Shouldn't it be lacking? (lacing has a different meaning).

As for the previous corrections I made on one of your other fanfics (about let and pain stricken), they're fine as it is. I apologize. ;;

Long live the lefties! I just loved this story - it was so cute! And I'm very glad that you made Fai and Kurogane both left-handed; we need to spread the love! (I'm left-handed too, so...yeah.) My only recommendation is to watch your tenses; in the beginning you started switching back-and-forth between past and present; not too hard to ignore, but still...

Lovely job!