I loved it! It was really sweet! You did an amazing job with this story!

Awww Axel wanting to be there for Roxas is really cute, love the story :)

good story! i bet this would be a great fic if you stretched it out over a few chapters and elaborated. nevertheless, i enjoyed it. :)

Loved this! Voyeur!Demyw is the best. Well, he wasn't really a voyeur but close enough. Alas I digress. The ending was very sensible! I doubt Roxas would let Axel sex him up so early, after all. I think a sequel would be awesome. If their isn't one already, of course. Anyway, I look foreward to reading more of your work! :D

Oh, I like very much. Very much. Lovely little fiction

This is by far the best story you ever have written. I loved eveyr second I spent readin git.

I love this story and how it progresses. A sequeal would be so nice . It's hard to find really good stories for AxelXRoxas. And they are my favorite pairing too. I love the ending too it was so cute and we all know who will be on top. *Hint hint* So adding you to my favorites.

this story was... AWESOME!

wow, this was a really good story. i enjoyed reading it all the way through. it had good use of details and flowed pretty good. the ending was kind of abrupt, but i think thats just kuse i wanted to keep reading :3 good job, and good luck with any other stories you are working on -

THAT. WAS. AMAZING. the summary alone captivated me because it sounded so... /different/, and as soon as i read it i loved it. amazing work. :D

I finally read the super duper, extra-long, impossibly funny, one-shot story of yours. . . Yay!

This was a really good story. When I read about the yaoi fangirl clerk, I kind of envisioned her being you or me. . . ANYWAYS. . .

I'm sitting this review laying down on my brother's computer which is missing all of the middle keys on the keyboard and I can barely see because Nile is on my chest, but through all of this I am still writing it. Why you ask? Because I LOVE YOU! YAY!

I'm going to be weird and hyper elsewhere now. . . Great story! .

wow, love it! It may not have all that hot sexy sex scenes, but it was, no it IS a good story to read , out of all that hot sexy sex stories out there. It's a great story.

The story was reall nice. I love it.

This was really sweet. I think you should write a follow up. Show people how things are between the Strife Family and Axel in the later years. But, this was nice. Awesome Job.

*squeals* That was SO cute.