I really hate that Zeus loved Demeter more than he loved Hera in this story. Hera deserves justice and so much more than having Zeus as her husband. Zeus shamed her to marry him by raping her and then commit hundreds of affairs, and I hate it how people blamed her for being cold and vengeful towards her husbands lovers and bastards. Hera used to be calm and kind, but Zeus actions took a turmoil on her. I love Hera for being strong no matter what, but she really needs to leave Zeus and live her life freely.

I just finished reading thisit was sooooo good! Usually fanfic is cringy but this was so good. I stayed awake till 8am to finish this to find out that I got rewritten in a different story

Franchement j'adore votre histoire dommage qu'elle se finit aussi vite.

I am so sad this story was never finished. It’s so great. At least it ended towards the end. I can imagine the rest. You’re right that the first few chapters were rough, but after that the story is amazing. I hope that you find joy in your arts.

Nice

I love this already and it’s only chapter three!

Noiccceeeee

WOW. Just, wow. I never was interested in Hades and Persephone what with the old dude being so dark and stealthy and all, but this is new. I only wish you would make Persephone a little more alive. Uh, I mean, she's kidnapped for goodness sake and she knows nothing about the sexual part. I think it's better if you build her up as an innocent character, but not without spunk. Other than that, well, great story. I hope you'd update.

I am just in chapter 6 but...omg I cat stop reading !I love it!

So, I just started actually even reading your story because my friend had a greek myth project that sort if illsirrated the story of Persophone, Demeter, and Hades. So, I was seraching up Persophone then Hades and I was about to serach up Demeter with them when I realized that thier could be fanfictions, so im like I have to read FANFICS. So I go ontp this site with a bunch if good fanfic but I chose yours and I actually really like it! Keep it up! Im only on chapter three though.

I love it
It is really nice
Continue writing !

What happened to Persephone?
I don't get it?

Love how descriptive you were of Hades appearance

i really enjoyed this series i just wished you could’ve continued it instead of starting a new one. i understand you wanted to start anew but even then you were a great storyteller. I love this story and you’ve turned it into something more beautiful

Just a technical scientific correction, but the reason veins in the skin are blue (as opposed to red) has nothing to do with exposure to oxygen (because the cells always exposed to the oxygen they're carrying in the body) and everything to do with the refraction of light as is penetrates the skin to make the human eye perceive the veins as blue.