Where's the next chapter? are you sure you haven't abandoned it?

great story i just don't like peter's vulnerable character he is usually strong-willed

This is an awesome story so far! Can't wait to see where it goes.

LOVE IT! !UPDATE SOON! !

Poor Peter

wow. so good! You're really good at portraying the character's traits and bonds and how they feel about one another and I really admire that- Don't stop! keep it up! (or if it's the end, I suppose I could live with that... kind of an open ended dealio I suppose- but if it isn't post another soon! :D)

EXCELLENT! Don't give up writing, you're doing great!

Don't EVER give up on writing this! My parents have something on the computer that blocks me from going to the internet. Sometimes the blocker doesn't work, and I can go on...but you are doing an excellent job! I'd appreciate it if you'd keep writing. Thanks!

I really like it! Don't give up writing, you're doing an excellent job!

Yay! It's so good you're back! I've been really missing that story, it's one of the best "Narnia" ones. :)

This is so dramatic, but It's kind of cool :) When I saw the movie, I was expecting Peter to overcome his fear and remain with the troops instead of running away. Great fic! :)

Hey! I have updated on this story before and i just wanted to say once again that i LUV it! I am stuck on it! Like literally stuck! Can u plez continue real soon? I NEED to know what happens! And btw u r like the best author on ! I truly think that!
Thanks,
Your biggest fan who wishes that you would continue this amazing story!

Please update soon! Awesome story :)

Just a note, in chapter 11 I think, there was a paragraph about how Edmund didn't know how to lead an army. If you go by the books, in The Horse And His Boy Edmund leads an army and very obviously knew what he was doing, like he had done it before. If you go by the movies, Edmund said "I've fought wars. And I've lead armies." I just think Edmund does know how to lead armies. I also think Peter is the better swordsman and Edmund is the one with the brains. Although, that's just me haha :) Anyway, great story and I hope you update asap!

Your Bac! Yay! Thank you for another great chapter. I luv it. Plez update real soon ok?

I love this story and the concept and story line are very original. I think you give us a great insight into what would have happened and what would have gone through Peter's mind if this was how the story had turned out. Update soon please!