Wonderful story! Love the fact the injuries weren't so bad but they kept going. Most stories go overboard with hurt and it makes the actions unrealistic afterwards. Excellent blend and I love the ladies! Especially with part at the end with Bobby and 'they faint more than a nun at an orgy' ! I love it!?
Dede

I just found this story and thoroughly enjoyed it! You really weaved an intriguing tale, along with humor, hurt/comfort Sam and delightful OC's. Loved the Mabel sisters! Loved the plot although my heart ached for the babies. Dean was hilarious. And you nailed Sam. Loved that you brought Bobby into the story also. This sounds like it could be part of S6. Thanks so much and I'm going to find your other works!

Wow, it has been a good long while since I've enjoyed myself so much! This was a fantastic tale - an the Mabels were the best OCs I've ever read! I'm too squeeful to be elegant, but I'm lettin' ya know - I've got this awesome fic saved to enjoy again and again!

*hugs*

Mandy

Awsome! I came acrossed these story last year and then I had computer troubles and lost it. Im gald I found it again. Peg and Floss are great. I think you should have to boys go see them again sometime.

LOL! With the ending. I honestly don't know where to start with this fic, it's so well written. Your characterization of Sam and Dean is wonderful, and I've even grown fond of the Mabel sisters with how overprotective they were of Sam and Dean. One thing I *really* liked here, is how even though you had Sam down with bronchitis, you still had him up and fighting and staying strong...kudo's to you for that one! While I'm a fan of limp!Sam at times, it's nice to find a fic that shows that he can stand his ground too ~v Overprotective Dean was awesome as well and you did a nice job of giving both boys ouchies and reasons to be concerned for one another throughout the fic...and you tied it all in with a believable creature and back story. Floss checking out Bobby towards the end when they were looking for the boys was *priceless* and I found myself cracking up in laughter as I tried to picture that happening! You had the elements of a nice angsty fic (with an awesome plot), wrapped around with some humor that just made it an added bonus. I enjoyed this fic immesely and found myself saddened when it was done! So again, kudo's to you for a job well done...*goes to check and see if author has anymore SPN fanfics to enjoy in*

This was hugely satisfying! An honest-to-goodness episode-like casefic! Fun OCs. Brothers getting bashed. Being smart and athletic and concerned and selfless - all my favorite things!

(I was especially glad that they rescued the baby and fried 'Black Annie' on their own - without Bobby or the old girls coming to the rescue. Of course, picking them up after one of them passes out is perfectly acceptable!)

Sam's reflecting on the family he might have had with Jess was a perfect little poignant note, too. I'm certainly adding this to my private stash of 'fic worth pulling out to re-read'!

Excellent story! Hilarious, well written, really loved it! Great job!

i just found this fic and i read it all today, i really like it, it was a great story and really interesting, thanks for sharing :)

Loved the way the action and suspense picked up in the last few chapters. The details of the cave and how each of the brother's were feeling was great.

I thought the baby was gonna give Sam away and I laughed at how awkward he was trying to manage. It was cool the way Dean just calmed Oscar down and how Sam remembered his brother had done the same thing for him.

Awesome hurt Dean -I always love to see him struggle with overcoming the pain factor...and you fixed him in the end!

I'm glad the Mabel sisers made it through the story - I wonder how Bobby is doing ? He deserves some pampering. (lol).

Thanx for sharing this - it was a great read.

lb.

Thankyou so much your story was awesome, I enjoyed it immensely. I loved the characters of the two sisters and bringing in Bobby at the end was great. This story could so be an episode and I loved all the moments between the boys.

This story was amazing! The depth of your characters and how you write Sam and Dean kept me completely enraptured in the story and able to visualize everything as it would happen in an episode. The Sam angst was definitely a bonus, too. Great job!

This made me Smile out loud :D

You did a great depiction of the characters and an all around awesome job. I loved it!

Thank you, thank you. This was a wonderful story. I just loved the sisters and your monster was absolutely creepy. I am going to add this to my favorite stories list. Thanks again... loved it!

great job.. I really liked that story.. good work

This story is one of my favorites! Well written, with an interesting plot line and wonderful characterization! Great stuff!

Awesome.. that was really good...

Wonder when you're going to start your next fic? _