cute

aww that very cute!

I actually really enjoyed the dialogue only.:)
It was a bit confusing at times, I have to admit, but I still found my way back and enjoyed it a lot.:)
~ro

DAWWWWW THIS IS SO CUTEEEEE

Cute. I don't have a whole lot to say about this, except that I think it works well.

Awww... It's so cute! Can I translate it into Russian, please?

I love one shot with dialogues and Jily' stories so... Loved yours too!

Yay! This is awesome, and the dialogue works well... and I love the last line.

Awwwww 3

aww this is so perfectly lily and jamesish! 3

i think its awesome

Cute. I'm rather surprised that I just barely skimmed through this. On stories with enormous 10 line paragraphs, I read word for word and this with few, simple words, I could hardly read. I possibly just wanted to know what happened at the end, but I'm going to go with I don't like this format. I guess I liek descriptive words, but just not too many. My opinion, but great way for a story and will always love this ship and this plot!:)

love it. i just happened to be listening to the song Iris while reading this. ITS SOO CUTE.

You wanted it so much, that I didn't see a way not to do it..

So, here it is...

I really liked it, the dialogue form, although I actually think it all happened too fast...But I can't see a way it wouldn't happen fast without be boring, so...

Good job!

“Because then…then things would be different. And you’d make me deliriously happy, and this is wartime- and I shouldn’t be so happy!”

*sigh*