Wow! That really was an amazing story and I enjoyed reading it so much but I'm also sad that it ended. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Way to give a cliff-hanger! Please continue with this story!?

You skipped...the entire lemon scene...how could you? You masterfully set it up with a finesse rarely seen...and then you leave us hanging...tsk tsk...

You are sick...taking away his alchemy...good plot twist though...but it makes me hate you...not really...you better had wrote in a way for him to get it back.

Good but if 6 months passed, winry would be showing and Ed would definitely notice

damn you wrote gracia well. she is a wondeful character. her pairing with hughes in the fullmetal series (in fact hughes was my favourite character and i was seriously considering going to japan finding the creator of FMA and doing something nasty and permanent involving jump leads and a car battery when they killed him off) was brilliant and that chapter reflects their relationship with ed and al really well :)

thanks i'll keep reading

rob

This is a nice story...if there is an update to be made it would be appretiated

Happiness.

I really enjoyed this story, you should definitely write more, you really have a talent for it. If you had more stories I would read them. :)

Dang it,I know you really don't need any more reviews, you get the amount that I wish I could get. But I have read some horrible stories lately(bad grammar, spelling, major out of character crap) and I know I've only read the first chapter but this is awesome. It's almost like you got to the same point I did after reading so many bad stories, you had to show everyone how it's done. Great job and I so look forward to reading more!

It was a good story. I think you took some irrational behavior from Ed out of portion a bit. I know he has faults and that his faults, escepically his temper, is pretty nocitable but he's not THAT bad. It was like you focused on Ed's faults the most and just ADDED ON. And 4 years is possible but a little too drastic. Maybe 3 years would be enough maybe even 2 years. But I will say you did portraying the characters good enough but with an extra side of implausable. Do you have a serect hate towards Ed as a single character?

I guess this story has similar feelings and situations compared to the Jimmy Neutron fanfic, On The Run. That story has similar elements and moments amounst Jimmy and Cindy as Ed and Winry have. But luckily for you, you made a 'real' happy ending with a better resolve than On The Run. Plus, your story is much shorter! On The Run was over 50 chapters. 50 LONG chapters...

I have to say it must of sucked for Al about the alachemy and age thing...

The major resons this fanfic is not great or wonderful or fabulous is because of: grammer, spelling, and keeping true to the charaters... unless you think otherwise..., let me know. But I did get a few good laughs and giggles here and there. If you practice more, I'm sure you will get better.

By the way I liked your use of vocabulary words. And I liked your version of Ed's proposal to Winry but I like one on youtube with the voice actors .

Keep up the good work.

Amazing story. Very well written and tasteful. The characterization was wonderful as well. Excellent job!

Great story, through and through. It was heavy and light in all the right parts, and your characterization is top-knotch. Love it.

*melts into a puddle of goo* aw, how sweet.

oh, and i agree with the other Ch.15 readers/reviewers. this story doesn't seem complete. that is unless ur making a sequel. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

wahahahahaha! i was cracking up throughout the whole chapter. i loved it. great job.