XD ahahaha, I like AshuraFai in this way, where Ashura is so dominating. Of course, Kurogane will have Fai and Yuui as well in the end deshou? He deserves both twins! I wonder what Yuui will do now... and why Fai has to be Ashura's lover to keep Yuui alive.

I really like this fic. Please update asap

I've read up to now, and isntead of commenting on all previous chapters, I shall comment on this.

I just want to let you know I really enjoy this story so far and greatly anticipate the outcome of it. I am a huge fan of KuroYuui ;D And Kuro/Yuui/Fai lol~ My favorite triangle.

So far I believe it is excellently exicuted and I like how you leave much to the reader to imagine (as in, I tend to write paragraphs and paragraphs of discription, and reading this short and sweet is refreshing 8) ).

Please update soon~ I have added you and your story to my alert list and really wish to read more soon!

You updated! You have no idea how happy this makes me! I was beginnin to think you'd given up on it. Please don't do that! I love it too much. It's just getting interesting. Update ASAP! I like your writing style BTW. Keep it up. ;)

I hope in next chapter there will come fight or sort of, since it sort of would suit in the mood.

I wonder if Fai will stay...I highly doubt that. Uh! And Yuui is seeing this all! Now, what he will say/do, I wonder?

The story was a bit lame at the beggining, then it got much better

I could actually visulaize kurogane yelling "he's using you Fai!"

Love it a lot.

Eh...I read the description. Sounds interesting...

Really interesting! Reminds me sort of Robin Hood...(No idea why.)

Kurogane is SO cute when he is all kind with Fai and Fai is also cute being all silent for everybody ells expect Kurogane.

Oh! I wonder if Yuui is sick of worry about his brother and will they find Fai or not.

well im kinda romeo/kurogane and juliet/fai freak..

i always associate everything about them..haha

you can't really say only few people read this, maybe they just dont leave comments or do not put it on as their favs..

but dont feel so down..i think your story is great..

update..update..

thanks so much..:))

Love it. Please write more.

Aww, this story's so CUTE! I love the part where Kuro-tan takes Fai around for a walk. He seems so nice (just wait until his real personality shows)

Yuui is LOVE! And Ashura is still a bastard.

Bluenette? *laughs* Interesting word.

Now, when will Yuui reappear in the story. I have a few guesses of where the story is going, but I won't say anything until they are proven right or wrong.

UPDATE! (please )

I think real Fai should end up with Kuro-tan! That never happens! If he doesnt he should at least end up with someone!

Love it. Please write more.

wa..please update..

love the story..it's like romeo and juliet..haha..

thanks so much..:))