| Reviews for The Party |
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   Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 6 . 8/10/2010 That is so sad ( So George and Nora are getting a divorce? Doesn't that just mean they can freely date each other now? |
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 5 . 8/10/2010 Hooray for Marti's success and the confrontation. |
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 3 . 8/10/2010 Sam has very fine points in his reasoning. |
| silverroses chapter 6 . 8/30/2009 AH how dare you dont end it there! |
| Cozmo chapter 6 . 7/18/2008 You really need to get a beta reader. This went way too fast, and the way that Casey and Derek admitted their feelings for eachother was way ooc. So get a beta reader and rewrite these chapters. I don't mean to sound rude but it was really ooc. Sorry. CoZmO |
| Don-Jam chapter 6 . 7/16/2008 I too can not believe George and Nora are willing to end their marriage over this! This is jest so...? Well Good. |
| monkey-monkey-underpants07 chapter 6 . 7/9/2008 great story! but i can't believe George and Nora were willing to end their marriage over this. it's crazy. hopefully their logic will come out in the sequel. can't wait! |
| Mia-SVUismylife chapter 6 . 6/28/2008 I loved this story! I can't wait for the sequel mia |
| iLoveYhuu14 chapter 6 . 6/26/2008 aww this whole story was nice and sweet bt to short |
| Leaf26 chapter 6 . 6/25/2008 Nice story |
| Just A Girl Of The Hollow x3 chapter 6 . 6/25/2008 That was bad. Very poorly written, characterization was completely off. The plot was so overdone it's not even funny. You need grammar and puncuation lessons. Very, very OOC. Really short chapters. Yeah, overall, pretty bad. I'm sure you won't like this review, but I'm perfectly fine with that. Say what you will, but I'm right. Just because you receive good reviews, does not by any means insinuate that you're a good writer :] Nice attempt though, really. Red ;] |
| VainConspiracy chapter 6 . 6/25/2008 This story was really good. I never expected George and Nora to be so harsh, I can't believe how easily it was for them to decide to split them up. It's like they don't care about love or feelings. |
| ellie141516 chapter 6 . 6/25/2008 aww! this story is soo sad! and in all of the stories that i've read there has never been something this tragic happen! what will happen to dasey and lizwin? can't wait to read the next chapter! hope to read it soon! |
| CrazyJMB chapter 5 . 6/24/2008 Wow awesome so far! I love how the action was fast at first to set the stage and then slowed down and delved deeper within the characters as it progressed. I also like how you keep the reader off-balance with cliffhangers and curveballs. Update soon! |
| Tokio Hotel Cutie chapter 5 . 6/24/2008 Ouch o_O |
