I love how authentic this feels to the show! Your characterization is spot on, and the plot feels like it would be right at home in the show itself, but it’s still original. Your monster concept is really interesting, and I like how you described the gradual transformation by giving us a few key features to focus on. All around a really good story. Thanks for writing it!

Ten years later, there's still people out there discovering and enjoying your fic ;)

Oh, where to begin? This fic was just brilliant. Everything was incredible: Four and Sarah were wonderfully in-character, the world building was remarkably detailed, the reference to Jack was clever, and the story was simply gripping. I loved it. Great job!

This is the coolist fanfiction of the Dortor who I've ever read! SOOOOOOOOOBEAUUUTIIIFUL! Sarah and 4th Doc forever!

Just wanted to say that the reference to Jack was brilliant, ha ha. I wish there were more Jack-meeting-the-Brig fics. I can't even imagine the absurdity that would result. Well written and thought out! Keep it up! :)

So I have to tell you I think this might be my favorite Doctor Who fanfiction piece ever. Believable, creative, very clever - you got the characters really well, too. I love it. Thanks for making this a fun week; I always looked forward to the time I got to sit down and read this fic. :)

Excellent! Well-written, exciting, imaginative, and sweet.

this story was great I loved it even though I i'm not a Sarah/Doctor shipper I

find Sarah having a crush on the Doctor cute so enjoy the hint's just not coming from the Doctor's side.

Awesome story! Really enjoyed it! :)

This is fantastic! Great plot, characterization, and writing. Thanks for sharing :)

Whoo! Random comment on old story time!

This was excellent. I am serious. I loved it. Violence, the Doctor changing, and not overly romantic Sarah Jane. I love it. Very good.

A great story! Well written, super characterizations, and compelling plot. I must find more by you now!

You are so talented. So how did this story only get 4 reviews?

Hey, awesome story. Absolutely loved it. I do wish it was longer though! I easily could have read a book on this idea. Well done!

Magnificent story! You captured the Doctor's and Sarah's relationship perfectly & did a great job keeping them in character!

Just as Tom Baker is my favourite Doctor, Sarah will always be my favourite companion - she's smart, brave (doesn't run screaming at the first sign of trouble), inquisitive, compassionate & about the only one that can ever really stand up to the Doctor no matter what mood he's in! As the Doctor says quite a few times, she's truly his best friend and in this story you've portrayed this quite brilliantly! Also the interaction between the 4th Doctor & Sarah is always beautiful to watch as there is a true affection & friendship there that is yet to be equalled by another Doctor & companion.

Overall a veritable masterpiece of fanfiction. Thank you for such a wonderful story - I really enjoyed reading it!