This is such a work of art. It's so simple. Saphira is one of my favorite characters.

Awesome last sentence.

You are awesome at writing, you know just how to call the right emotions into places to make a boring story, interesting and investing, I encourage you to try writing your own story, anything that comes from your kind of talent would be good, I thank you for telling this story.

I liked the last 2 sentences it shows the bond between the dragon and it's rider!

It is interesting to see Saphiras point of view from inside the egg!

In short: very nice one-shot!

I liked the last 2 sentences it shows the bond between the dragon and it's rider!

It is interesting to see Saphiras point of view from inside the egg!

In short: very nice one-shot!

I love it, you're really talented 3

I like this. It has a deep feeling about it.

I LOVE this fic. I've read it a few times, and I'd like your permission to write a sequel of sorts for it, just a one-shot. I'd be sure to credit you for the original idea, and mention your story in my author's note.

I really like this, was it hard to write?

Wow, I haven't read Eragon fanfiction in a good long while but, this, this is one of the things I'd always wanted to write.

Very impressive.

The last line was gorgeous! I loved the story story per whole, but the last line really touched a string to my heart.

nice story

Exceedingly well written. Very nice. It was deep and well thought while still being cute and warm. I can really picture Saphira going through this as an egg.

Very well written. I liked it!

It's extremely well written and 's journey from her mother to Eragon is cute and deep at the same time, even sad.

:D great work!