While I've yet to read anything bad from you, this story pisses me off.

This is the first Aeka/Tenchi fic i've come across that actually had a good plot. I can't believe how Ryoko actually did it for the Princess than for Tenchi... just an unbelievable story... n.n

Storymind

*in the libaray, crying and everyone is giving me strange looks* that was so sweet, Ryoko was such a nice person...i love her so much

OMG. If you don't make a sequel to this...one where RYOKO AND TENCHI CAN be together...I'm going to find you, stuff in you in a sac and throw you down the Hoover Dam.

ABSOLUTELY BREATH-TAKING!

*screams in agony* MOOOOOOOOORE!

i...i cant think of anything. i feel lost and confused after reading that. i mean i dont get the ending. could someone explain it to me? i guess i cant figure it out. maybe i'm making the simple out to be hard but i just dont get it. i have the tanascity to make easy things complex but is tenchi with ryoko or ayeka. i know it seems he's with ayeka but it's just...hmm. 1st your being a ryoko fan and saying that tenchi ends up with ryoko in all your stories made this confuse me.2nd according to the ending the journal had said ryoko and tenchi just isnt the kind of person that would go against his feelings after they were brought out in the open especially if he didnt want to hurt someone but had to hurt one and he certainly wouldnt hurt the one he loved over the one he just cared for right?

maybe i'm just stupid and confused but if anyone one could tell me u'd be very grateful. plz someone email me or post it or something. anyway, another great story even it was a heartbreaker. untill then Dreamcatcher...

another great story. but i dont get it at the end. maybe i'm making something simple complex but i cant tell if he's going to be with aeka or ryoko. he had written ryoko's name as it said at the end but did he mean that him and aeka or him and ryoko were together. maybe i'm being dumb and thick but could plz explain it to me?(:P) anyway just wonderin and another masterpiece

God that was a great story I had to read the ending twice to understande, but it was wonderful! You write some of the best stories!

Wow... this is an amazing piece of work with the an incredible ending! I wasn't expecting it so I had to read it twice to make sure I understood exactly what Tenchi wrote. And now I can not stop crying over the fact that Ryoko lied about whose name was on the paper and forced Tenchi's hand in choosing instead of waiting. This was honestly touching. Thank you.

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet... but not in a cool way.

Mushy... but not in a sick way.

Good... but not in a corny way.

So what is it?

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!

Oh my gosh... this is so... so... so... wonderful and so very, very emotional. I could never write something with this much emotion and... and... wow.

I have only two suggestions -

1. On the paper, when it read "There's just so much stuff going on here all the time, I can barely think straight half the time." You repeated the same word twice in a sentence and it sounded akward. You might have wanted something more like "There's just so much stuff going on here all the itme, I can barely keep my head straight through half of it."

2. When the paper ended "I love you-" and then the story went on a ways before that was finished, the reader could have gotten confused or lost. It might have been a tad easier to comprehend had you made Tenchi reapeat his last statement on the paper Ryouko held instead of simply having her name on it.

Otherwise, this was absolutely excellent. _ You really should write another chapter, or at least an epilouge of some sort.

So... so, Tenchi really liked Ryoko? Ah, I'm gonna have to read it again. But, anyway, it was a wonderful story! You really have a talent for this... unlike somebody I know *points to self*

That is so sad! Ryoko is so kewl. I can't beleive she did that. I just like to think that eventually Tenchi tells Ayeka the truth. Anyways great story!

Ongaku

Well, as much as I'd hate to admit it, you do write an exellent story...even if it isn't my favorite kind. I can stomach sad fanfiction, but it's much easier if it ends happier, not to mention if my favorite Tenchi girl had gotten him. But, anyway, it's an excellent story and you should keep writing. Just don't write such sad stories, ok?

My God man, that was good. I really do not know what else to say, other than the usually indomitable god of thunder is nearly to the point of tears. God. Well done.

What an emotional and touching story! you've captured the characters and each moment so percisely and beautifully. The ending was just heart wrenching. However, I didn't quite understand why Tenchi agreed to be with Aeka when the person he wanted was Ryoko?