She escape askaban to get back to him?! Unbelievable. I’m not sure if I should laugh at the absurdity of it

Uhhhh Hermione was just raped. I think she would be more distraught, don’t you think? Her talking to him, being sarcastic isnt very realistic. I have agree with the person below me. Hermione’s character is a 180 version. She’s non recognizable. Her attitude and sarcastic jabs aren’t realistic to what the real Hermione would do in her situation. It’s so very odd. At this moment, as I read, she should be terrified and traumatized. Instead, she’s talking to him as if it’s any other day, she want to talk to him, regardless. Good beginning tho. Hermione character is just lost in translation as the story progresses.

Hermione is very OC. She's a traitor and I can't believe she fell in love with her rapist...that's not the Hermione we know and this senseless killing she's committed because she's lost her temper...what?! I can't believe she live the man who killed Harry...practically her brother. That's just stupid!

*Laughing my ass off!* Hah!, Hah!, Hah!, defend that, weasel!...*More laughter!*

(Sniggering gleefully) Now that's the way to deal with the filthy ginger blood traitor!, he and his kind should be wiped off the face of the planet, otherwise pretty soon the whole wide world would be overrun by a sea
of his descendants...

This was a great story. Obviously the last chapter is quick and to the point which kind of sucks but the story is so great I think you can get away with it(; jk but really I love all your stories please never stop writing _

This is a great chapter love

Nice story I read all of your storys and they're really good

"you WAS pretty..." (were) "when you WAS younger" (were) "them sleezy men" (those)

Hermione is British, not a backwater hick. I hope this is the only chapter that she sounds like a character from The Dukes of Hazard. ha.

Great plot so far though.

What the fuck did he do to her finally cracked she has
Bloody gruesome good story
Brilliant thank you

Love it just love it

Interesting story

I enjoyed this alot alittle ooc but factoring in the who the dark lord has taken over I say it quite realistic great job and keep writing ps. I'm immensly upset I haven't come up with this myself
Erissia

really great i love it jus think theres a little bit too much dialogue

great work, this is well written and I personally like that the characters developed at a slower rate, it makes the story more realistic.

Thank goodness the story was already finished. I don't know what I would have done if I had of had to wait for the next chapter to come out!