Oh god it was really sad :( but good as well. Demyx was really strong trough the emotional roller-coaster! Now the epilogue was in Lyric's perspective, it made me think. I lost my father because of cancer too. It was sad, really. But I guess I should be as strong as Lyric :) great job, writer. You did an amazing work!

How did I know that Axel would be the one to slap some sense into Zex? On second thought, don't answer that. Wonderful fic so far, Lovely c:

i can see larxene as one of those abusive mothers or something just barley its a hilarious thought though :)

Aww :) Congrats for your mom:D

That's awesome. My Gradma died a few monthes ago because she had panciatic (? How do you spell that?) and skin Cancer and at the same time! She didn't last very long... Anyway I love your story It's amazing :)

I will leave an undoubtedly and sagely and useful review later, but for now I want to say that I POSITIVELY ADORE THE NAME LYRIC.

This made me cry. It's a really good sign when your writing conveys emotion. I honestly wasn't expecting Demyx to die at the end. I mean I caught on to the pressure in the head thing but I didn't think it would end like that.

I absolutely loved Zexion's graduation speech; it was simple. Just like the rest of the story (which is a good thing by the way). I really loved this story.

[sob] Awesome story. Don't really have anything else to say right now. Words are not enough.

People really like changing word order around, huh? That's the second time I've seen the phrase "it was like a flip had switched" instead of the other way around (which makes more sense and doesn't draw attention to itself), "a switch had flipped." You flip switches, you do not switch flips. Unless changing the word order around is part of the point. Then it's clever.

Ahem. Ranting over with, this story is quite an enjoyable read. Lyric is adorable, though I can't help thinking that she'll be teased ridiculously about her name when she goes to school in a year or so. Also, I'm assuming you made your main characters' last names Montague and Capulet on purpose to draw attention to the fact that they're going to fall in love and that people aren't going to be very happy about it? Maybe just the first bit, but that would be the reason, yes?

Also can't help noticing that you put the first chapter of this up on Zemyx Day. That's awesome.

I swear I don't mean to criticise you. Please don't take it in that way. On a happier note, seeing the "Complete" tag on your story made my day. It would be a shame if something this fabulous went unfinished forever.

…wow, long review is long. There will probably be more when I read more of this story. Have a fabulous day, Author-san!

Wow this was just amazing! It made me cry so much. It was so sad but sweet all at the same time. Demyx's death, Zexion's speech and Lyric's wedding were just so...I don't have words to say how much i loved this story. lol

My cousin died from brain tumours 4 years ago so i kind of knew how Zexion, Axel and everyone else would have felt. Stories like this are just so real and to think that someone around the world would have had a life just like this, its just so sad!

omg...I loved the whole story so much! I would've reviewed more, but I was reading it on a DSi. I almost cried when Demyx died. I almost cried again when Zexion made his valedictorion speech. And again when they went to the graveyard. And yet again during Capter 20. But I loved it SO MUCH! Well done! :)

omg, loved this chapter! almost cried when Demyx did! ...is that overrated?

Loved this chapter! Lyric is adorable! But when is Zexion in the story?

I loved it a lot! Lyric sounds so cute!

you REALLY made me cry... YOURSO TOTALLY WAESOME HARDLY ANYOME CAN DO THAT! 3

Ok i have to tell you its 12:01 right now...i started this fic at 10 , i finished it and am now crying my eyes out! I loved this fic. Its one of the best fics iv read in a very long time! Keep up the good work!