Reviews for Gunshots
DemetriaFeels chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
i know someone who would do that...so im like scared lol

good story though
Bloody Violet Heart chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
.God! You are too nice! Seriously! You didn't have to do that for I enjoy to review and your stories have such nice plots, but thank you for doing it anyway *tears of gratitude*.

(btw, the name is written correctly, I think I'm the one who wrote it wrong when I did this account, how silly of me :D)

Now to review your story!

I think it goes without saying that I loved it! Why?

For one you have improve your wirting skills in a great ammount. Adding to this, although the story was short it was not as rushed as some of your previous ones, since you made sure to give it a setting with a short time-span; this is very important when trying to quicken a story.

The story had slight romance and definately drama, but it also had some humor (I love humor). An example of this was my dear Oliver in a fetal position, lol! I did like how he tried to protect the girls too.

But, what I most loved about it was the unexpectedness (I don't know if I'm writting that correctly I hope you understand what I mean). I never expected Danny to be the one shooting. You also gave him a good reason for it, and were able to explained the background for his actions in one small sentence. (I myself always felt sorry for the poor boy in the show).

I also didn't expect Jake and Jackson to come through the door, or for Jake to be so supportive.

Yet, what I less expected was for Danny to go upstairs and thank them all for not picking on him. Really, REALLY unexpected.

After this you added more humor with that last sentence, depending on how you look at it I mean. I found it rather funny when I imagined it, lol.

Anyway, I guess I should end this review already. So, with all that said, I think this is one of your best works.

Awesome job!
TheEvilPumpkin18 chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Is that it? If not, plz update! I like it!
Xx.Get.Over.It.xX chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Another great story!
Truscott chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Cool story :).