That's so utterly adorable!

The thought of Sirius falling to sleep on Remus is just... -squee-

And it was very well written. You gave the feeling "I love you," are three words not usually included in Pad's language.

i loveed that.

I enjoyed this, although it was a little on the short side. It is nicely written though and very sweet.

That was sweet, I liked it. :)

Oh, that was lovely. Very sweet and tender between the pups.

I liked it very much. Short and sweet.

Aaw. Very cute. I love the way you portray both of them because that's how I always imagine both of them. :)

Hi,

I enjoyed this a lot! You managed to create a feeling of coziness and sleepiness with your words. I like how you kept everything so simple instead of going into dramatic angst.

Good work!

Yes, I did like it. I thought you caught Sirius’s character very well: the restless energy that sends him out to run in the snow for hours. And Remus going along with it because – well, because it’s Sirius, but liking it better when they’re in the warm common room with the snow firmly shut outside. The ending is sweet but there is a trace of sadness in it – it makes me think of Sirius’s death when Remus says “Sleep well, love”. I wonder if that was intentional.

A beautifully atmospheric piece of writing anyway. I hope you’ll write more stories.

Short, but well done!

If you have the time, check out my own story "Inheritance" )