I was pleasantly surprised by this, I don't normally like Siri/Harry unless it's time-travel fic but this was intriguing. I found it by accident and i'm glad I did, I love the way you condenced it to only a few words and you write really well. It's passionate and you can feel Sirius' different emotions through it all. :) Thank you for writing this little peice, its almost poetic.

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"Sirius pulls on raven black hair and lets out a strangled moan, from beneath his naval a small muttered “fuck” can be heard."

"He blames the hair; it’s the same texture, same color, and same length."

"He has his father’s ability to turn him on, get him hard, and keep him that way."

Gosh, I had a girl-boner reading those lines!

Very well written, so beautiful fic.

Loved how you describe the physical resemblance between James and Harry, as well as the impression of this fact inside Sirius' mind. Twisted, inevitable, lustful.

GUH.

I think that you should write another chapter about Harry's reaction. I would definitely come back and review again. ]

oh hmm, it was good. short and sweet. :) x

Utterly fantastic. As i was reading i kept thinking 'Oh that's a wonderful line' and 'Oh that's gorgeous' and i was all prepared to tell you which lines they were but then i realised i'd jut end up repeating the majority of the fic to you. The slightly edgy Sirius is always best with the hovering thought of James-James-Harry-James in the back of his mind. I think what makes this particularly deliciou is that Sirius half-knows what he's doing, that Harry isn't James, and that makes it so much more heart-wrenching. Wonderful job.

The power of fucking Christ compells thee...I will NEVER think of you the same way.

By the way, you forgot to put a period after the last word.

:)