I like this story but I hold Whitebeard in high regards. He would not get angry at his children for stupid reason, and they don't call him sir. He's Oyaji

I know it's been years but I would love to see this as a extended story. I didn't understand the majority of it but I'm sure if you wrote more and explained it would make sense. Until then hun

#giggles

I still dont really understand much...
But i understand some...

And it's funny...! XD

If only it's real...! Lol

Oh Ace...

more?

Oh please continue this! PLEASE! it's such a cool idea!

FAN!

i loved it a lot

And to make it more confusing and complicated, is the fact that Ace himself is the only son of Gold. , whom is Whitebeard rival~ XD

*clap2* Love this story concept! Plz write some more!

hm, i must admit, i didn't quite manage to grasp everything you've brought up. i'm mildly confused right now...

This is an extremely amusing story. The whole family concept is just to rich! Hehe, I really liked this whole story. Great dynamics. (:

This fic is made of Awesome. The mechanics (grammar, spelling, characterization ect...), plot, and the whole idea of family and what not.

NYAN! Smoker's WB's son? ZOMG. *flails* That's so cool! Gaah! I can't wait to read more!

Awesomely interesting!

Wow! I love it! I love the Smoker/Ace pairing and the way you have written this piece. I think you did really well in writing how Whitebeard was Smokers father and i see it now. It's totally awesome.

I can't wait for what's to come cause I love your fics. Keep up the good work.

Curiouser and curiouser. Ace is confused, the crew is scared, and Whitebeard and Smoker actually managed to speak civily face to face for at least five minutes.

Can't wait for the next instalment you put up.