I read this some years ago, but let me say this: For heaven's sake, this is probably the most erotic fanfic I've read on my life.
I read it years ago (like other fanfics), with google translator, therefore, there were things that I did not understand or that I read in a more plain way and even with mistranslations. But now, that I know how to read English quite decently, I could appreciate in all its magnitude the piece of art you have written. No, seriously, this is art, there is no other word to describe it.
Everything is so ... oh god. From the beginning, with that look of young, passionate, physical love, where they are still getting to know each other, exploring sex in every possible way until it hurts. Then, reading Rukia talking dirty to an Ichigo who can barely stand the pleasure is... divine with that touch of sin that burns.
And something I love, and I don't lie with that word, is that Ichigo is a careful lover, even if he hadn't realized that sometimes she doesn't have her orgasms. Yes, there is some ego, but it's still for her. I think that your Rukia, selfless even with her own pleasure in order to see Ichigo being a mess under her is quite canonical, the girl is able to leave everything in order to make her loved ones happy. However, she is a lucky girl because Ichigo does care to have her satisfied. The part where Rukia says that the connection is what matters is so tender.
"I think this junmai-shu tastes better off of you" Ichigo purred as he spoke against her skin. I just lost it. My sanity came out of the window. The rest of the fanfic was mindblowing. So wonderful, with a lot of charm and love, with Rukia letting herself be loved and a dedicated Ichigo. You took an idea like wakamezake that by itself would not have caught my attention but you made it extremely fascinating and sexy that it is impossible not to read and reread. I just lost my mind.
Unique. Thanks for writing this.

soo hoooot ... hope you continue this story thank-you

Wow,its just...amazing.I must say what an imagination you have to write the story...its just perfect...do write more

Damn! Like... That was soooo hot! God I wish my bf would read this. Great job on the lemon. They're super hard to write apparently but you've got it down for sure

I adored this! It's rare to find a guy whose so interested in whether or not you cum too; he gets an A for effort!

6 years later and youre still getting reviews. This was intense! Thumbs up!

*ahem* Damn, that was really something else! Do you have any tips for writing lemons? I'd like to try my hand at one :P after I've had a chance to fit the pieces of my exploded brain back together.

Well

Wow that was pretty hot. And it's also the first time I've ever seen someone use wakamezake in a lemon. I've seen shitty beer play but not wakamezake. It needs to be done more often! So bravo for an awesome story!

that was just gorgeous

it was hot i wish my girlfriend could do that with me but im only 17 *sighs*and if i try she would not be my girlfried make that imaginary girlfriend

Hahahah! Go Ichigo! I really liked this story. It reminds me of me and the guy I was with. Almost exactly the same. Anyway, it was very good.

H.O.T!

that was great!

Oh, fuck. That was... Wow. I think you've caused my brain to short circuit. That was very, very nice. I may have to go and get myself a nice, calming cup of tea to restore normal functions... If my legs will support my weight.

Thank you ever so much for sharing.