That was so good

What an interesting story! To be honest, I was hoping it would be longer so we could see more of the twins - and see whether or not they would bring Anakin home. :)

I absolutely love this! I feel like Anakin's definitely the center of this story, and I really like the way you managed to do that.

Padme!lives stories are awesome (although it's hard for me to find a good one), and this was definitely awesome. Love it!

Couldn't you have Obi-Wan and Padme kiss?

Interesting. Nice stuff.

very well written, but i don't see padme this naive when you have the news of vader going around killing all those who don't support the empire. or when he eventually blows up alderaan, what would padme say? there is still good in him?

otherwise, amazing story. i love the depictions of padme/obi-wan you portrayed. i especially loved the comment about how if vader killed padme's family, it would be their fault too. i want to see more stories where obi-wan really loses his temper... i love conflict )

Not merely well-written: you explore these characters and thier relationships so well; I find myself eagerly imagining a much happier future with Anakin and the twins (and Obi-Wan and Padme) all together as a family.

...of course, there would have to be some EXTREMELY DIFFICUL conversations first. Possibly some loss of limb. And Obi-Wan might very well be blue and intangible by the time this happy ending comes along.

...I liked Obi-Wans remark in response to the slaughter of his family.

Wow, this was wonderful! I love the way you had Obi-Wan act like Luke and Leia's father and I love the whole thing! It was great! Keep on writing! (

great writing. though I wonder what Padmé would say if Obi-Wan mentioned Darth Sidious. It's not like you could appeal to his good side. I hope you write more in this AU world.

Lovely!

This was really well written and interesting and a little scary with Padme near the end but still brilliant!

Oh, how I adored this.

Thank you.

Very much.

wow cool

Loved it

I hope you continue more in this little AU world. I'd like to see Luke and Leia grow up and confront their father.