Yeah great story! But you should do a sequel where Kevin breaks out! I mean seriously Gwen, don't keep a jail in your own house. If you're trieing to protect your daughter you should give that thing to Ben or Max. It's wrong for her not to tell them, because what if he takes her by surprise next time and really does bad things to her. Ben won't even know he had found her in the first place so he won't look out for her safety. But then again that surprise could be saved for the sequel.

I was always under the impression that in this timeline Kevin never became involved with Gwen. But that was really good.

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A dark fic; unsettling yet thrilling! This is a well-rounded fic considering it is futuristic. The flashbacks compliment the story well.

A slight critique; the only thing that really seemed off was the punctuation. Even so, it does not create a major distraction from the story, although noticeable.

Parts of the storyline seem a tad unclear, but I suppose that fits alright considering the mood. Kevin's rough advances were well organized, Gwen's reactions just as well. Considering this is a one-shot, I like that this fic has no decimate resolve. Overall, A successful attempt.

Aww... Now I feel like a tard. I finish reviewing your story "Indulgence" only to return to your profile and find this right under it. Derp. How about reading next time, Navi?

This was awesome. Sorry, my energy level's a bit down after my freakout from Indulgence. xD So just because I'm not shouting to the heavens about how AMAZING this story is, don't think it's not. This is just what I needed. I don't even care that they didn't make it to the bed in the end. () ;D

Just reading this fufilled my want to see adult Kevin and Gwen interact in such a way. 3

This is an awesome story. I hope there is a sequel because the ending leaves so much potential. It was wonderfully written and the intensity of emotion was powerful and perfect.

i really believe tht this is how they should be-good story

Part of me can't help but wonder what she's about to do... and another part of me knows EXACTLY what she intends to do.

This was amazing! This is the first Kevin/Gwen I've read preAlien Force. I am impressed and pleased! I especially loved that his final line Perfect. Like this oneshot!

Ah the perfect interpretation and execution of the Gwevin phenomena.

I salute you.

wow, that was awesome, u should continue

Yes! Finally one story where the girl can full out refuse the guy! Girl power! The memory was so in character. No typing errors and you portrayed the scene very well. I really recommend not writing another scene cuz I would HATE it if he overpowered her and made her pay for this time. If I were her though I’d let Ben rip him apart for attacking me. I love the ending. Great story!

PLEASE continue this story. Your writing is excellent and the tension between the characters and the story is addicting.

I loved it, this was amazing, although I was hoping for a little more confrontation at first I don't think it would have worked in this fic.

OMG! This is like AWESOME! PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel, I HAVE to know what happens next. Great job, keep up the cool work! PPMS :)