Just when things got more interesting you stopped writing :((
I really hope you'll continue soon. This is such a great fic. The tone is light with the banter, yet at some points it gets heavier with some anticipation. Really enjoy my time reading this, I could picture the scenes you wrote clearly in my head. You're a very talented writer!

Please finish this story! It's amazing: has the Tony sass, Pepper spunk, and a good storyline. I know you're still writing on here, so please finish. And this review would be longer, but I'm on my tablet.

Pretty please!

Even though this fic is probably abandoned, I just have to tell you it is a wonderful story. You write Tony and Pepper so well. Even if you decide never to finish this one, I hope you write other Pepperony stories in the future.

you can't jst end it there! update! i love this!

I love this! Please don't tell me you've abandoned it.

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Nooo! You stopped right at the good part! You left us on a cliffhanger! Excellent story though I wish you'd finished it.

Oh please don't tell me this story is abandoned! It's wonderful with Penny and Tony dancing around each other, nefarious financial doings, murder most foul, etc, etc.

Omg I loved this! But then I looked down and saw there were no more chapters! Crap! Please don't leave this sitting! Its really good!

look i know your trying to be all suoer suspenseful and your doing a great job but the importance of whats he's trying to tell pepper is really going completely over my head. i'm guessing that it has something to do with stocksm i really dk.

Hilarious and so much fun!

Dear Lord, PLEASE continue! I'm in love with this. I really am!

The plot thickens! Wow, it took me a while to get caught up on this. Real life can be annoying sometimes...

Anyway, I still love this—banter, characterization, idiosyncratic moments of fidgetiness... All lovely.

Aww. I just love Pepper/Tony stuff. I enjoyed the second movie, but I find I'm drawn to the speculative fiction of the first movie a little more. Are there any plans to finish this story? You write them very well, and I like Tony's slightly stalker-ish reactions you've written in.

I really, really, really love this story! I love the way you write the characters, and I love the plot! You write so well! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow, what a great story! Suspense, subtleties, gentle flirting without Tony pining Pepper up against a wall (which, don't get me wrong, is fun and has it's place, but I appreciate it when there's a build up, especially a well-written one), OCs that are interesting without dominating the story, hm... I think there's more, but maybe I'll wait until you UPDATE before I say it! :-)

Please, please, I realize this is probably futile as you haven't touched this in a year, but if you feel a spark coming back, I really, really want to know how it turns out!