And now, the players leave the stage. I, for one, give this story a full standing ovation. It's your best work yet, and I don't think that any amount of complication or change could make this story more complete than it is. Simply incredible!

Loved every word, and looking forward to the sequel,

Your friend, Firestorm Studios.

So, HIS name was Talinus? Well, he's been defeated now - thus brings this villain to his end! A great final fight scene - now onto the final chapter!

YAY!

GOOD STORY!

And the final battle begins! XD I love the bickering between Sora and Talyn, and also the use of soul/heart/mind glass panel! Loving it, and looking forward to the final battle chapters!

Good going as the plot thickens it makes me more intrigued everytime. i had to read it three times just to type this review it was that good. Keep up the good work.

And finally, the confrontation! Excellent chapter, and a great use of Al Bhed! Now, the final run begins, and I'm looking forward to it!

Good to see Sora's not bitter over Talyn! Also, looks like Elion, Lynx, and Rictori have a bit of undercover espionage to do! Very good, looking forward to more!

XD For some reason, I imagined a huge awkward silence when Elion said that! Anyway, great chappy and excellent fight scene, I'm glad that Danas is out of the picture for now! Onto the next chapter!

Great chapter! Full of suspense and everything! I already eagerly await the next chapter! Good luck!

~ GoldenTalesGeek

P.S. If you're still on MySpace, keep your eyes peeled for my pic changing. I'll be posting a few pics of me in my Halloween costume... :D

STRIP HER? 0_0

And YAY FOR HALLOWEEN AND YOUNGER SIBLINGS! (Okay, I have no siblings, but still... CANDY HUNTING!)

Great fight scenes! It looks as though Talyn and Sora will have to defeat Hades! Excellent chapters, can't wait for more!

Uh-oh! Looks everyone's in for a fight! Onto the next chapter!

Great chapters! I liked it when Hades showed up. But, I especially loved it when Talyn "persuaded" Hades against having Sora in the Underworld. I can't wait til the next chapter! I hope there's more fun to come! :D Good luck!

~ GoldenTalesGeek

P.S. I'm sorry for not reviewing on the past few chapters. I had a little surgical procedure on my mouth a couple weeks ago, and it's kinda knocked me for a loop.

Ooh, here's a dilemma! If Talyn wins, they get the eye! But if Sora looses, someone evil will be able to sweep in for the kill! Truly excellent situation you've got going here!

Great chapter! It was a little exciting! I hope Riku's absence is a short one. I really can't wait for the next chapter! Good luck!

~ GoldenTalesGeek