I've been reading a lot of Caspian x Susan fanfics lately because I sorely miss these two characters, and I miss being a child again. I'm so happy to have stumbled upon your story. You've given it such a good mixture of pain, loss, love, and hope to the Pevensies and to Caspian as well. I'm so happy he and Susan are able to live their lives together again, and I'm certainly hopeful they will be together with Edmund, Lucy, and Peter in Aslan's country someday. Thank you so much! You've made me cry especially reading Edmund's anguish. ️

It was magnificent tale of family and love

Grateful you rounded it off nicely. Hate cliffhangers.
Great story! Love it!

I love that idéa of a sequel other whatever, and I would love if you made it!

I love the line about how Susan was fighting a battle they couldn't fight together. It very strong considering their past, and beautiful. I might suggest a trasition to Susan. It's a bit abrupt.

YOU'RE MAKING ME CRY! GOD I BOTH HATE AND LOVE THIS STORY! ITS SO WELL WRITTEN AND DESCRIPTIVE BUT ITS SO FREAKING SAD! (AND YES, THIS IS SAD ENOUGH TO BE IN ALL CAPS).

This was by far one of the best Narnia stories I have read on this sight and trust me I've read a lot!

I love this story. Not loved, but love.

sua linda narração me fez chorar pelos capítulos anteriores mas uma forte onda de alegria atravessou me com o esse final . :)

amazing

I really enjoyed your very detailded descriptions making your reader feel connected to the characters. I admit i also teared up a bit during the goodbye between Susan and Peter. I lovede the in depth view of her relationship between her siblings and caspian... fantastic job

This is a really sad story. I have read a lot of goodbye stories, just that this is the only one where susan says goodbye to her siblings. It was a good thing that you decided to interverne at some time and chance the places because then i would have kept crying. Well at least that one has a happy ending although i have to admit i was more focused on the familiy rather on the couple. I think goodbyes seems so final and i had a similiar thought when i read the third chapter, the part with the lying under the grave, it makes it more real, much easier to grasp it. All in one i loved your story

Good story. The descriptions are great but a little thick in some spots. Pick up the pace in places and you've got even more gold.

Beautiful story, wonderfully written. I loved every bit of it.

this was a beautiful story. i am very glad i stumbled across it :) you are a fantastic writer, this was superb.

much like yourself, i was also unhappy with the caspian movie...i think this was a great way to end it. bitter sweet, happy with a tinge of sadness.

keep writing! :D i'd love to read any more stories u have for this pair (if you so choose to write them)

Oh my. That was such a heart-felt ending to your story. Inspite of the Pevensies not being able to see Susan until they reach Aslans' country, I'm glad they were able to have time with her. To at least speak words to her and to have something to remember her by. It's also nice to know that Susan at the end is also happy with what she has.

This is a very awesome and great story. If ever you intend to continue it, I'll be glad to read it. If ever you just decide on keeping it this way, I'm glad nonetheless.

I'm also glad you updated :) Keep up your good work :)