Great story. :)

That was a fantastic first chapter! I loved it! I can't wait to see what will befall little Eragon and Murtagh!

cool story

AMAZING I LOVE IT!i sweare you are a genouis you can out write AMAZING!I LOVE IT!

its a sad ending but it was great!

wow

I recognized the lyrics! You took them from the Lion King 2, when they banished Kovu. But I forgive you - they fitted in very nicely!

P.S Loved the story. You should write more.

it was so sad, the ending, aw, (cries), i even had tears in my eyes when i read those last chapters, (cries again) i loved Murtagh, but at least it's a happy ending, though sad. (sad face)

aw, no offense, but the ending was really sad, i still loved your story though, and my opinion is i still don't like the ending, aw, it was so sad

i didn't like the ending it was like you were trying to rush and ruined it

maybe that just my way of seeing it

Wow this is an amazing end. Loved the songs.

Like, OMG, you used songs from Spirit! I love that film! And those are definately my fave two songs from it. I cry whenever I hear that bit which Spirit's mum sings in 'Sound the Bugle'. Yes, I offically love you.

The ending was sad, yes, but sometimes you can't forgive and foget and I'm glad Thorn and Murtagh didn't get their heads chopped off.

Thanks for writing such a good story. At the beginning, I have to admit, it felt a little laboured, but when it got into the really AU stuff then it got so much better.

I really enjoyed it.

Speak soon!

StuffRocksInnit

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*puts sword away* good you didn't kill him. now please excuse me while i cry my eyes out that it is over and murtagh had to leave *starts to sob* seriously i have tears in my eyes as i read this. well the ending. i love this story. please give us some oneshots or a sequel or SOMETHING about taggy! please! oh please!

You know, I knew you weren't going to kill him, but I was kinda hoping you would. It would be major progression in the fangirl area. xD Seriously, Murtagh NEVER dies in our stories. I like it when he dies, honestly, if people respect him after his death and give him a loving buriel. HATE it when people spit on his dead body. T.T (fumes)

So... election day tommorrow! Sadly I think Obama will win... (sigh)But it's good for you! :P

Welp, come visit me in New Zealand! D

Good ending :P I sniggered a little when I noticed all the lines rhymed. :) At least he didn't die, and knowing Angela's prediction he'll meet Eragon again! Y Y!

i like it.

such an ending, befitting a story!

great job.