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BEAUTIFUL. Ahh, really great Persona fic. Good writing and a great premise; and a really fun and interesting read. Thank you very much!

Wow, that was o_o wow, amazing.

This has got to be the best story i've read on Minato so far. You've written him so well, and how his personalty gave off, (well on terms to the manga version of Persona 3 x3) another thing is, i like how to wrote up on his past and how he's got to face the future, it made me feel sorry for the blue haired kid ;_;

I freakin love this! it's the greatest _ you're the greatest. thank you for a one of a kind read.

nice... oneshot or a full length story hope your going to continue.

awesome! :)

~SorasKey

When I have to read something twice... it's deep. Good job all in all. Your sentences were all simple, and it was short, but those aren't bad by any means.

As far as critique goes, I suggest something a bit longer, and something that relies more on intelligent dialogue and less on perspective, as well as something that has a more direct focus in time. This only did well by lacking in those in my book because it was a particular look at the MC's thoughts about his personality throughout the story proper.

this is really lovely, compelling in its simplicity. it tells real well how minato must be seeing things, how he feels, how he thinks. your narration is smooth, the words and the way they're phrased give you this feeling that you're looking in on a secret. and the sentiments are well expressed. i've already read this twice, and i thought i'd leave a review. very pretty. i hope to read more! kudos!

This is a nice story. I'm working on a crossover. Check it out when you have time.

I give it a 5/5 on youtube rating! I liked it. The style was nice, though quite different than mine. I enjoyed it.

Good story and nicely done. The mood was pretty good