This is so so great. It really highlighted how badly the show needed something like this. That moment when the car is all crushed and Jess is scrambling to get to Rory. Gah, so well written. Its really lovely and beautiful. I could picture it perfectly in my mind. I love and hate the end with Jess calling Liz. It’s heart breaking that she doesn’t even know the voice of her own son. Just loved this.

wow! that was deep!

THIS WAS LITERALLY SO PERFECT I'M GOING TO DIE A

Amazing!

I don't often review oneshots, but I felt like this one was a bit different. You have quite the amazing talent here. Your scenery descriptions are so vivid and the way you write makes everything crystal clear. Great job on this story, I'll definitely be reading more of your Literati work.

~PIXIE~

The last line just hits you in the face. Jesus. What a perfect way to end this.

Brilliant. Beautiful. Thank U.

The ending was perfect.

So achingly beautiful, so heart-wrenchingly sad. I love/hate fics centered around Teach Me Tonight, for obvious reasons... It's so easy to believe that a lot more happened in between ice cream cones and the hospital, because Rory and Jess just spell potential, don't they? But the course of their lives leads to the accident and leads to him leaving. Even if he was undeniably tender and they were finally honest. Even if she forgives him. He does end up leaving, doesn't he?

No happy endings, but still a really beautiful piece. Loved it. :)

Ahh, so that's what happened in between ice cream and Rory being at the hospital? Haha, I enjoyed reading this one very much as well! Damn, if only they had kissed. Great job on this one! :)

“If you need me to explain any of the terms they use, let me know.” -I love jess so much. :D I can see him saying that.

Your newest fan,

Sara

Wonderful piece, dear.

Every word was perfectly placed, every action was perfectly done. I really liked the depiction of everything. It was fantastic.

Brilliant.

-Lani

very well written!

Perfection, as always.

wow, love it. i love hwo you have the conversation and the sarcasm down SO perfectly. and so full of emotion in just a few lines. :) awesome awesome work. i'm always a little mad they didn't show the car wreck scene because i would have loved to see how jess reacted, probably something like this.

gosh, i miss literati! i need to have myself a marathon, soon.

can i request that you write some future fic? where they're together again, happily living their life post-finale? i love reading that stuff but can't find much of it. :)

great great work.

Oh my god..I missed your stories so much! Thank you for this!

Loved the angst throughout. And loved Jess. I thought they will kiss! *cries*

/“Just checking to make sure that word escaped Rory Gilmore’s mouth.”/ hhahahaa

The part with the Dean-Rory convo was great..and Jess's reaction.. :(

/“One piece of advice: if any doctor tells you to take your clothes off so they can check your wrist, just say no.”/ :D :D

The banter between Jess and Rory is so perfect..

Please write more often! And is this the light lit one shot? just curious..

And umm..can't stop myself from asking..but will you be posting the Redemption sequel? please do! It's been over a year since Redemption ended..and it'll be so great to read the sequel.