I really liked it :)

Really nice one :) I love this idea - especially how you portrayed the Master's feelings for her.

I would love you forever if you write more to this. Amazing.

Oh! What a brilliant last sentence you wrote. :)

You know what sucks? When you read an amazing fic, like this one, with a great plot that would be perfect for a multi-chapter story but all you can have is a one-shot. :(

(But too much of a good thing can kill you right?)

Poor Martha! You've written the Master/Saxon really cool, like he's calm about everything, which I liked.

I hope you write more Martha/Master one day; the ship has an interesting dynamic and judging by the way you've written this you've got a great handle on it.

Wow...

Sweet, and heartbreaking for Martha!

I really liked this story - it's a new , interesting twist on the story ;w;

Really good. There aren't enough Master/Martha fics so it's nice to find a really top-notch one like yours!

Very nice way of telling, interesting look at that kind of guilt.

Oh creepy.

Thanks for writing.

I know it's complete, but I'm left wanting more. That was really awesome how you did this. Really nice.

I like this but i think you could easily turn this into a story instead of a oneshot, please?

THAT was good.

It works really well as a one-shot, but I wish it went on!

gd fic

O! I totally love this. It's so... yummy. And terrible. And kind of... real. That could totally happen in real life (except for the insane Time Lord bit), and it's just... cool.

Oh! That was spooky in a way. I liked it, and I loved how it all comes together at the end. Very good!