that was !

Ryoma just makes me laugh :) Go Tezuka

ROTFLOL! THat's nice~ I love it! Poor mitsu got scared for life because of Ryoma's attempt. XDXD

-Yuu

Ryoma, creating an emergency is NOT a good thing. I repeat: NOT a good thing. Tezuka, I commend you for managing to work on your paper for as long as you did.

Well written! Fun read!

Wow, talk about drastic measures. Way to be devious, Ryoma. *grin*

I don't think Echizen would bother people or crave attention so much. Still, it was fun to see the usually calm and stoic Captain Tezuka in a panic. It is like him to try to finish homework before anything.

Aw...-...that was so cute and fluffy. Poor Ryo, getting ignored lyke dat...hahaha Kuni 'TRYING' to do his homework so totally him...lol...come on now people should know dat Ryoma can't be ignored at all especially if his in the same room with you...cuz you just want to smother him silly! At least for me :D! Cool fic by the way, hope to read more!

Ryoma is a manipulative little attention whore...but i love him...Go Ryoma...distract your boyfriend.

AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! Emergency! AHAHHAHAHAHAHA!

Ryoma is such a brat... He's going to cut Tezuka's life by half XD

-Crys

your plot idea is rather engaging.

i liked how you made tezuka swing from one end of the emotion bar to the other without making him OOC. i can just imagine him being like that.

i also liked the idea for ryoma, though the bratty prince type has been rather overused by writers in general. but then, the pillow suffocation is a rather brilliant idea. i'm curious, how did you come up with that?

one thing that was a bit of a trouble for me was the pajama scene. when i skimmed over it at first, it seemed to flow ok, but when i read it again, the part where he was putting on his PJ pants.

your story really is an attention-getter. good job!

seyyan

kya~ that was really cute

I really wonder how you get these fluffy ideas... I never get them... only once in one hundred times...

and the emergency thingy seems just like something Ryoma would do...

~Kiki