| Reviews for It's Clobberin' Time |
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PichiKeen chapter 1 . 8/6/2008 This was similar to a fight scene but there was still a developing plat and dialogue! Crazy stuff man, crazy stuff. |
Dysfunction Junction chapter 1 . 6/9/2008 This is great little fic. It's both humorous and contains fighting. I really enjoyed it-having all my favorite characters in it helps too... |
someoneyoudon'tknow chapter 1 . 6/8/2008 So freakishly good...loved it. Marth's obsession with his tiara was funny...and the whole punting people across the stage thing. Attaching Link to the side of the stage with his own sword? Brilliant. Write more or suffer my wrath! |
Shadow R-B chapter 1 . 5/25/2008 Oh, wow. . |
SchwaWarrior chapter 1 . 5/21/2008 I don't think you kept Ike in character so well, but then again, I've never played FE:Path of Radiance (the game he's from), so hey. The other thing I don't like is the ending- it has no closure. The short paragraph doesn't cut it for closure- I would've drag it out a little more. Maybe with dialouge after the fight was over or something. Other than that, nice, solid story you have here. Good work. :) I hope to see more from you later. |
SmashersUnited chapter 1 . 5/18/2008 This is one of the most well written oneshot's I've seen on this site, well done. Not to mention it was really funny too. The only thing I would suggest is that when you are connecting two words with a dash, don't use spaces (green-clad, not green - clad). |